All Comments on 'Hell, Yeah Ch. 04'

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littlecyclonelittlecycloneabout 17 years ago
Nice

Really enjoying the series. Thought it was gonna go in a different direction for awhile, with the talk of loans. Thought they were going to move in together! :P But keep up the good writing, i really like your style.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hot!

The whole senario of possibly being caught makes it really hot. Good story. Keep writing more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Delightful!

Delightful dialog. Delicious description. Demurely decadent. With all those Ds, I have to give you an A+!

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 16 years ago
Great

Great chapter, can't wait to read the next one.

secretdesires69secretdesires69about 12 years ago
Hot!

I know they were in a walk-in cooler, but damn! That was hot!

KarensClit1990KarensClit1990over 5 years ago
I love standing sex 🔥

Great descriptions.

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A lot has changed since I began writing on this site 16 years ago as a wet-behind-the-ears 20-something — met an amazing partner, got married, started a business, and became a mom. Life with a kid underfoot doesn’t exactly make for much free time for sexy writing. I still da...

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