All Comments on 'Hell, Yeah Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Loving this story.....

cannot wait to see what happens next.

lovegal73lovegal73about 17 years ago
Can't wait for the next installment!

I check every day to see if the next chapter is posted...I LOVE this series. I would love to see her tie HIM up, and have him begging. Great characters!

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 16 years ago
Getting Better

Another great chapter.

VladimirKnockoffVladimirKnockoffabout 14 years ago
I loved it

Beautiful story, incredible chapter which stands on its own. That was really, really hot! Descriptions of actual penetration especially were very arousing, and, uh, make me wish I weren't alone at a computer right now. Great job.

secretdesires69secretdesires69about 12 years ago
Very good

I liked his reaction. It gives us hope he'll profess his love to her soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I love this series, it's very unique. I really wish that you'll continue shaun's pov cuz it's fantastic. Thank you so much. You're so talented :)

-Teresa

KarensClit1990KarensClit1990over 5 years ago
Loved the bar sex scene

Quite hot

Like how you describe so well how she’s feeling.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Outstanding romantic storytelling, with great characters and a marvelous plot, although this all-too-short chapter makes little sense as a stand-alone read. Five stars.

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