Hell, Yeah Ch. 05

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"Uh," I hesitated, perched on the edge of making another joke; something in his voice held me back. For once I bit my tongue.

We stood like that for a while, behind Shaun's bar, arms wrapped around each other, silent in the dark. I felt as if I was standing on the edge of something big. I itched to say something, anything that would break the silence but held myself back. I could feel Shaun relax against my body, the long and exciting day having taken its toll on him. Smiling into the darkness I took his hand and silently led him from the bar.

If I'd learnt anything about Shaun over the past few years, it was that he came to his own choices at his own time. Rushing him would do no good.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Outstanding romantic storytelling, with great characters and a marvelous plot, although this all-too-short chapter makes little sense as a stand-alone read. Five stars.

KarensClit1990KarensClit1990over 5 years ago
Loved the bar sex scene

Quite hot

Like how you describe so well how she’s feeling.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I love this series, it's very unique. I really wish that you'll continue shaun's pov cuz it's fantastic. Thank you so much. You're so talented :)

-Teresa

secretdesires69secretdesires69about 12 years ago
Very good

I liked his reaction. It gives us hope he'll profess his love to her soon.

VladimirKnockoffVladimirKnockoffabout 14 years ago
I loved it

Beautiful story, incredible chapter which stands on its own. That was really, really hot! Descriptions of actual penetration especially were very arousing, and, uh, make me wish I weren't alone at a computer right now. Great job.

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