by firstkiss
I enjoyed this series thoroughly...a great combination of playfulness, tenderness and the erotic!
The story was great, the whole series kept me riveted. some series drop off and lose focus on what made them great...not this one!
I thought you concealing the name of the main female character was WELL clever!
Kept me hooked, and the love scene at the end was beautiful. Just fantastic.
And HOT - both the girl and Shaun :)
Zera
Great story from a beer loving, hockey loving gal in the U.S. I think we all want a guy like Shaun. Nice work.
Loved all the stories in this series! Nicely written and thought out.
I didn't even realize that the girl's name hasn't been mentioned until the last chapter! That was great! I hope you continue this story and 'I Thought I Hated Him' too. Please!!
Great story! I wish it didn't have to end. Oh and I didn't know Canadians watch football.
It's a wonderfully written series. Too bad it had to end. But I'll be waiting for more of your stories.
You wouldn't believe the similarity between Shaun and mine(from physical to history)..Thanks for an amazing read!! A nice ending to a great story. Perfect :)
I love the character development. Yes, there was sex in the story but it wasn't the central theme. Now that I have read this story I am going to have to read all your others.
I loved the story...
I would like to read more about Shaun and Jackie.
True love exists and not just in fairy tales.
Thank you for sharing the wonderful story.
After reading all of your posted Stories, I do feel like leaving a comment :)
I enjoy the way each of your stories is individual, that your characters never look alike and the way you always bring a new theme into the ancient song.
Wishing you the best for your life as a writer and of course also beyond writing :)
M.
The characters were believable enough (except the constant "hell yeah's", to be honest). I also noticed (just read Rhi and Lil's stories) that you bring the same elements to your stories - bicycle, the phrase "humour me", touching a woman's waist, a small woman giving birth to a large son, etc to your stories - almost like a signature. I'm a fan (not like those creepy ones); I may not like this series 100% but I hope you continue writing. Keep up the good work.
I love your stories. Just a heads up tho, Sean is the Irish way to spell it
I really want you to finish this one!!! please, pretty please with sugar on top?
actualy i love all your workits actually has plot and it believeable truly outsanding there needs to be so much more like this on literotica
I'm glad I've discovered your stories. I look forward to reading them all.
than to curl up at home in winter with a firstkiss story to read...
I'd love to see your characters get into anal sex; there was a brief teaser in the Hell, Yeah series.
And I'd love to see you write a historical romance! Now that would so exciting!
I thoroughly enjoyed the story, the plotline, the descriptions and interactions from the first chapter through the end. My solitary complaint is the forced and over use of the title in the dialogue. It became distracting at times. But considering that's the only negative for me, it's not enough to keep me from reading more.
Such an honest story ... I loved the way you portrayed her as really relishing his words, and loving how she made him feel. It's a feeling lots of women would identify with. Can't wait to read more of your work!
Ive read this story and writers block and theyre so tantalizing and sexy, i know fairy tales dont exist but the fact that these are normal people who are horny as fuck and just as loving makes me feel as though i need to get with that crowd
delicious treat. Two great characters - Jackie & Shaun. Tantalizing action that flows smooth and quick. Sweet, hot romance and no cringe moments. Light and playful -- a must read for those who like it gentle with some kick. Take care...happy 2013!
for those who luv 'love'. I finished reading this story Dec 29 and commented then. But I keep coming back to it in my mind, and it is now an all-time favorite. Can't say enough good things -- but it is everything a great story should be. Luv it! So free, so easy -- it's all about what love could be. And the title's just so appropriate for it. 'Hell Yeah' and take care...
I love this story, but I think this is the first time I've read what her name was lol.
good english as well...just the odd "off of" when off alone would have been better...
This is your first submission? It's REALLY GOOD!
What a great love story! I can't wait to read more.
Would add you to my favorite stories, favorite author, but I cannot remember my password, can't log in.
Gary13
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