All Comments on 'Hell, Yeah'

This was a great story..would love to hear more

The Moosehead and TSn references told me you were Canadian.

You Canadians are great....

Great hot story.

Little gal is pretty damn hot. I, too, woulda choked on my beer on her oral sex comment.

Night might have been interesting, too.

I actually worked as a manger/bar tender at a restaurant to pay for undergrad. One night the female assistant manager from the pizza joint next door came over and we had a scene that was close to that of the story. Good writing by the way.

This story was awesome, I loved it. It was writtten very well. The dialouge between the characters was very interesting.

Hot story, firstkiss! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Can't wait to get on the rest, you have that style gal, and I love it! Thanks!

Soon as I finish this thankyou note, I'll be saving your site on literotica. Great storytelling, and it makes me hard. Tnx everso....

Alexander Keith's? HELL, YEAH! haha my favorite beer

Very good. No cliches or unnecissary meaness, just real life. Oh, and Iève definately been the benefactor of an "I miss the oral sex" conversation!

I really enjoy your style of writing - can't wait to read your other stories.

great story. You have a great style of writing.. paying attention to the hot small details makes it worth reading!

. . . to what I know will be an outstanding series from one of the best authors on Lit.

I had forgotten how HOT this was..Will you be writing more on Shaun's side of the story? I think it needs to be finished. Thanks for posting!

nothing compared to the ten part series : "i thought i hated him"

i miss my daniel

:)

all those stories were the best on lit

naughty...but very, very nice! Great fun tone. Can't wait to read more in this series. Take care...

I love this series. You really get to know the characters well and feel right at home in that bar. It feels like the "Cheers" of erotica. Very well done!! (DonnaBeck who is having password issues and did not wish to remain anonymous.)

Thank You! I enjoyed this realistic sexy story. I could imagine his cocky grin, the hungry way he was looking at her, and the easy camaraderie that made the sex and the laughter between them so natural.

Having worked with guys the past couple of years, I could feel how natural this was. There is never NOT a time when you're not attracted to one or the other of them, no matter how many times you scold yourself. This was a nice tale of giving in, and totally well written. Thanks!

Stacy