All Comments on 'Hello Mr. Robinson Pt. 12'

Because when I found your chapter this morning, I decided to start with chapter one. 9 & 1/2 hours later, I am thrilled I did. What an epic adventure! I sure hope your muse is kicking and screaming to get more of this fine story posted. I can't explain what a pleasure it is to discover another writer at the levels of Tefler, Final_Stand, RipperFish and OverRed. I will now favorite you and keep an eye out for new postings and be back to look over your other works. Thanks L B, you got game.

Thought this storyline was dead.

love this story and I am glad you are writing more of it. I love it keep it up

I binge read your story from start to finish-I just couldn't set it aside. Overall it's a good story, there are some errors in grammar-not many and not bad enough to detract from the story. There are places where it jumps around and loses the thread. Still and all it is a very good story. You could be another Tefler.

Please, please, please write a sequel.

Hell of a Chapter . A very good read. Thank You for the story .

Thank you for coming back to this story. It's one of my favorite and I truely enjoyed the latest chapter. Please don't keep us waiting for next chapter to long.

Great story. I’d love to read more.

This has been a fantastic read, and I am looking forward to the next chapter

Outstanding story can't wait for the next chapter

Please Sir , may I have more.

So, I blew out my meniscus ligament, again, and am stuck convalescing. Sure would love a story, preferably in the Shaw universe, to read from my favorite author on literotica. I am rereading the wheel of time series, but it's so vast You need a breather. Hope this finds you healthy and wealthy.

Cant remember my password,

Warmonger

Wow. I hope you're still writ8ng more for this. Phone comment so brief but WOW

Fantastic story hope you keep riding would love to see more chapters

This has got to be the best SF that I have read in a long time