All Comments on 'Helping Out'

This story was full of typos. Spell check isn't psychic. You've got to proof-read as well.

Enjoyed your story. Keep-em cumming. Thanks.

who helped luke and lynn

Your story line is great. Please get someone to edit for you. Also, who helped Lynn and her husband? His parents? Does this lead into family sex? I'd be willing to help edit, just contact me.

There can be physical mismatches between partners. Often couples try to work it out but neither is satisfied. The people in the story have a good solution

All it would take is a

proof reader

the spelling errors were so distracting I almost gave up.

It could have been a good story.

A good story but, as others have already mentioned, it would have been better if you had used an editor and eliminated the grammatical errors. Also, you needed to let the reader know who the older couple was who helped out Luke and Lynn when they got married. Plot points like that need to be tied up or you just leave the reader hanging.

loved reading about both couples learning and teaching and fulfilling long time desires. and is there anything more sexy than when a woman lifts her hips to let you slide off her pants?? loved it!

Incest is between blood relatives. Fkn your sister-in-law doesn't qualify.

Otherwise an OK story other than the often mentioned mistakes.

Woot

Love how the neophytes were helped out by the experienced lovers. And a good time was had by all!