by SierraSprite
I have now read both of the stories of this series and I wanted to say that I am looking forward to reading the continuation of the story. I don't know if you have been using an editor, but I am happy to say that I have not noticed any places where the missing words or extra words or wrong words have caused me to lose the feeling of the story. I want to thank you for taking the time and the energy to write this story out and provide us with so much entertainment. I know that it takes much effort to do such pleasure producing work. Keep it up and THANK YOU again for this pleasantly spent time.
Excellent series, looking forward to more. There are certainly a lot of moving parts, and it certainly isn’t typical of any genre.