All Comments on 'Her Bodyguard'

What a great story of two lonely people finding each other, well written. Could have been two unrelated people love story, Keep writing.

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This was a beautiful story, and not something I write often here, but heartwarming in the way that they found comfort in each other :) Really enjoyed reading this!

I loved this! You had me hooked from the beginning. Beautiful and realistic!

You've written one of the most exciting, touching love stories I've ever read and I thank you for it. No sequel could make this story better than it is. I am envious of your talent. Kudos!

I'm glad you liked the story. To me, your positive comments are memorable gifts.

Beautiful love story

My family used to go look at people's Christmas lights. Taking the time to include things like this was worth it.

The dialogue was stand-out in its honest simplicity and realism. I appreciated it greatly.

Only critique: the line where he held his knees, hands and head was awkward. I had to back up twice to get what was being conveyed.

Other than that, 5 stars. Favorite so I can read it again for the story. In a venue such as this, good stories regardless of the erotic content are worth remembering.

I love that it's not the gushy, mushy constant oh my god sort of story. It felt like it could be real. Could have been or was someone's life. Great story. Well told. Keep writing!!

I loved it. 10/10 I do hope there will be a sequel

That was a fantastic story, I love that you took the time to develope the story with the background of the characters.

Superb work

The plot, the characters, and the builldup all were done very well. Characters acted and talked very realistically. Specifically liked the part where there was a time off to think things through.

please continue

Excellent story, had a bit of everything.

Well worth the 5/5 l give it. Into favourites it goes.

5/5