All Comments on 'Her Brother, The Maniac'

enjoying this and hope you keep going with it. Well written to me. good job

This could get interesting indeed....Please do continue soon Ms.Diaz

SO FAR, SURE HOPE TO SEE YOU CONTINUE THIS. A VERY INTERESTING PLOT! THANK YOU

Not really much more than an intro...

I gave 5 stars as incentive to write more. Great start, but it's time to let your baby grow up a bit!

Thank you for the kind words and support. Chapters 3 and 4 are pending and I am currently working on chapter 5. Stay tuned.

As a fan I'm so interested how this story progresses between the two of them.

And I'm also pleased there's 5 chapters too! So far at least lol,and hope they'll be many more to come..

Rachelle and Shane seem to me like the 'perfect' couple,I envy him so much..Oh well,at least I could read these offerings you posted and dream about my own older sis.... Thank you for that😁

I have submitted four and five as well and I am currently working on six. I have also been inspired with another project in the making... but it's a secret...

Looking forward to another chapter

They deserve to know the truth.

Can't wait for the next chapter when they have an opportunity to love each other

if the boy was 4 when she was 4 months how is he 20 when shes 18?

but so far so good. im off to read the next chapter.

I did just realize the error. I had to do some quick edits to make sure she wasn't underage for the rules of literotica

I was going to mention the age difference error, but it has already been addressed in other comments and the author has acknowledged it as well.

Tragic start to what potentially could be a great love story. I really like how she fell in love with her brother before finding out that they were family. Nice touch!

In spite of this being a single page beginning and the previously mentioned continuity error, I still gave you a 5/5.