All Comments on 'Her Heart's Desire'

As an eroticism, it is luke warm, but as a story of friendship, and love absolutely beautiful. A great story where sex is not the story, but a vital part that could not be glossed over.

This is a lovely story of friendship and affection. It is not entirely plausible, and there are a score of potential problems which COULD develop....but then, such is so much of real life. I liked the story.

-- KK in Texas

I loved the friendship, the connection, that made the sex more powerful. To me, this sort of thing is more enjoyable than the "gonna fuck dat cunt, cumslut!" teen-dream writing out there.

Another great story. You should do some work on expanding this one, make it longer :) Maybe eventually a little swapping between the couples. Keep the great stories coming!

Good job. I like your writing.

A loving story with a plausible tale of fantasy becoming reality unexpectedly. A easy and comfortable story to read with a satisfying ending. Thank you.

Write some more. I have read them all and enjoyed them all.

The commentators above felt as I did that this was a well written story with the necessary advantage of a true 'friend with benefits' but no 'wham bam mam'.

Very special.

I can't give it more than three stars as it's more a story idea than a full story. It's all over too soon. It was a very promising opening page and nothing after. Actually it left me kind of pissed off that I wanted to know more about his own relationship with his wife and all the other things that needed to be explored. Too bad!

Great first page but pissed that there isn't anymore. Make another page or two and it will be the next best seller.

What a great little story and so well told. Thank You.