All Comments on 'Her Idea Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Btdt

My woman set up my first time with a guy and We were hooked. Love the story.n

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Read over your work before posting

Your storyline and imagery is really hot, but you should really read over your writing before you post it. So many words were corrected by spell check, but they are incorrect in context. Cleaned up, this would be good reading. As it is. It’s just really hard to read.

Rwa4768Rwa4768about 5 years ago
Great story

It had me wishing it was me losing my virginity to a man.

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