All Comments on 'Her Marine Bodyguard'

I really enjoyed this. It had a good story line and the erotic build up happened at just the right pace to match the character development. The level of detail was consistent and the use of point of view and aside comments was perfect.

Keep up the good work!!!! How about a sequel where she gets injured and they muster out back in the states with another marine couple.

please continue this story

3/5

Awwww that's it??? MORE! ;)

Uh oh. I think I might love you. ;)

I enjoyed the buildup, though there could have been a little longer finale. This story demands a sequel! 5 out of 5.

2/5 1 MAR DIV

That's definitely a great story, but I'm with the others, there needs to be more! I tried to find your work on Amazon, but it seems to be gone. Any hope of it being available again?

Love it :-)

Great story line and superb sexual scenes. This one is better than Love in the Military, probably because it's longer (hmmm) and you had more time for plot and conversation development. Very well done, sarge. Or is it gunny? Or something else - but you write from experience,.

Jamaica could have some exhibitionism... Perhaps.

You've done a great job on the stories I've read thus far but I see a trend. They all can and should have more chapters.. many more chapter. You have room to add more and try out what ever is in your head.

Keep going, but won't she get sent home if she gets impregnated? Just saying

I have to say this is one of the best stories i ever saw here. It brings back all the memories how i met my wife in trashcanistan (kunduz, rc north). She liked your story too. In both aspects ;)

Greetz and gung ho from germany

OR8 / LRRP

you write the most incredible stories here.. I love the way you bring out the passion even the readers can feel it

Loved frank discussion of physical attraction and anticipation of foreplay while carrying out duties of life.

Would be interesting for a follow-up story to see how this couple handles the reality of civilian life.....5 stars for this one.

"...as we continued our long into the night." Continued our (what?) long into the night? Great story, I'm just a little OCD about details, like words left out, that sort of thing. All-in-all, a great, sexy, moving story of two people coming together in the midst of war. Always a good counter balance.

Found a bit of love in that hell hole!

Seeing the elephant was a time that will always be in the back of my being; I hope to never see again.

Great story!

Love your work. You do such a great job with Character development. Thanks!

Sheesh! You even make wartime sexy. Thanks for writing another winner of a story. I think I grew up next to Ericka's aunt. Except she was Greek. And I was too shy. Oh well...

Your stories have the air of reality about them while containing the best about erotica. Thanks again and I look forward to reading your next story.

I enjoy your writing style. Your dialogue and your storylines are very entertaining.

Thank you for your Service Gunny!

And secondly, fuck I enjoyed this! Lol

Very well written, great build up, great characters, all of it. Good job sir.

I was a little surprised Erika didn't take him in her mouth to start round 2, but I don't hear him complaining, and neither am I.

Definitely going to check out more of your work. ;->

i very much like your style.

many thanks.

ex military

Loved this story as it reminded me of when I was stationed in D.C. on a Navy Reserve ship and had my girl friend on board for dinner and ended up in my state room with both of us naked. Wow what a time.

NOT AT ALL LIKE MY DEPLOYMENT, WISH IT WAS. I LOVED THE STORY

Masterful, both of them.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Nice!