by ThaDee
I know you weren't planning on sharing the girls but now that you have I hope you expand on it. I hope we get to read Sam and Julie's experience.
Now that the cats out of the bag with Julie & Sara, should have Sam and Jay invite some friends over the next day and really have them turned into bbc sluts. Keep up the good work!
Liked the story. I know you posted saying you didn’t like that it ended up here but it was good. But let’s hope they don’t continue sharing. Go back to just Sara and Sam and Jayson and Julie. Good work. Can’t wait for more.
Interesting chapter, moving quickly from scene to scene. Like the sharing, is all part of the evolution, who stays with who, who ends up being just a total slut and nothing more etc...
Hey. I criticized you for a weak chapter 9. I’m here to give you mad props on Ch 10. All the energy, sexual chemistry and sexual tension are there consistent with previous chapters. Can’t wait for 11. Waiting for the bomb drop. I’m guessing chapter 13 would be appropriate
Thank you all for the feedback once again. Yeah, I never planned on having any of the women shared, but for whatever reason the writing started going off in that direction. I won’t take it too far though, and have these girls being passed around like a basketball. They love their men and their bbc’s but they’re not the typical sluts you see in every other story in this category that end up with multiple men. They shared between friends and that’s it.
Let me hear more feed back. Not sure when I’ll get time to write the next chapter.
Can't wait for the next ones. Maybe get the girls to develop an impregnation fetish.
I think, in next chapter you should focus on oldies. More on Shannon and her stud, may be others two to watch them. I would say, prolong Shannon's husband episode now and have her watch Julie enjoying Jayson - thoroughly. Agree, both young girls should be within existing circle and have them impregnate multiple times in coming chapters.
*ATTENTION*
I’m currently working on a side story to this series. Kinda writing it to inspire me some more. Then I’ll know what kind of place I’d want to go next. Don’t know when I’ll finish, but hopefully I’ll have enough time to work on the one shot spin off and post it soon.
I hope you write about shannon's husband, but i hope not that kind of wimp husbands shit, i hope he would take care all of the black men and bitches in a very painfull consequences
Is this ever going to be updated? Really disappointed that it’s been so long.
Great characters and story, like that you didn't follow the sharing theme. Keep it up.
Yeh I enjoyed also. Classy Sharron. But what happened to Ryan? I hope he comes our trumps in the end.
this amazing and very good written story. Thank you for your effort! The story is one of my favorites ... Kind regards!