by daves40004
Great story. Five stars. There was very little touching before the fucking, which shows you how foreplay does not always need to involve physical contact. Strip off your clothes and just look at and enjoy each other's nudity. He'll get hard, and his cock will pulse and throb. Her pussy will moisten, and her lips will open. Don't rush. Just enjoy watching each other's arousal. When you can't stand it any longer, you will come together having unforgettable orgasms!
This story, while a great story, is filled with tiny mistakes. Use of the wrong words, like using there for their, is very annoying to the reader.