All Comments on 'Her Present; Her Pet'

Great start. Very different from other SM stories. Full of love and care,

keep it up. And please continue your other story (Love is Universal)

as well.

Thanks...

Please continue I love it so far

PLEASEEEEEE CONTINUE!!!!!

Please continue, nice start

This story is great. I can't wait to find out more.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, more!!!

A fairly good opening chapter.

There are some typos but not to many to distract from the story, but some more characterization would improve it. The thing that lets this story down is the total lack of emotion, questioning or even resistance from the girl.

Hopefully there will be more chapters about these two, but let us see some reaction from the girl .......... or is she an android?