by PacoFear
That was HOT!!! I knew I had to read this after reading "Bobbie's Lesson." You really know how to build up sexual tension, and still develop the characters. It was a wonderful story.
Very cool great job this is a fun ride I like your patient style no jumping right on to get to the fucking. Sex can be so much more when we use our imagination and dont rush.
It's like an oral sex manual built in to a super-hot erotic story. I think I gained several hundred experience points just by reading this!
Love the way this builds. Peaches sounds a very special girl. Looking forward to the rest of the series
Still great writing before anything else!
But, anyone who has ever been deepthroated will know there's no swallowing involved in your ejaculate travelling down to her stomach IF YOUR TOY HAS ALREADY PASSED THE POINT WHERE SWALLOWING TAKES PLACE: THE ENTRANCE OF HER THROAT.
So either his dick is down her throat, then there's nothing swallow, or she is swallowing his cum, indicating his dick has been pulled out of, or didn't go into, her throat.
Seemingly insignificant, but a spoiler when you're just getting into the scene.
Anyway. The writing's still good, tx!