All Comments on 'Hero's Life Ch. 14'

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SithspitSithspitalmost 15 years ago
Interesting...

So...kenpo. *eyes widen*

My nephew watched me work out one day and his description of kenpo is more direct than yours, and I like yours MUCH better (There's beauty in the violence), but he described it as "Mutilation before death."

Yeah. So right.

Anyhow, great chapter. I've been reading them all in order, and they're very entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wow

Very interesting does bubble ever get to learn sam's secret? It would be interesting to see how she would react!?!?!?!??

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Intense

And in so many ways!

J

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
SO GOOD!

Great chapter. Love how you blend it all together. Thank you for a wonderful, complex, sexy tale. Well done you!5c81

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