by PatriciaFCartier
Very hot story. Keep writing.
Good start. Keep going
Very well written. Erotic. I hope to read more of these.
You wrote a really good, erotic story for your first foray into ‘Erotic Storytelling’. Please continue.
Steve
And excellent story. Real and natural. All the better for it.
I actually liked it a lot. I was hoping it would continue. Either more pages or chapters. Thank you
Loved this story, pity you didn't wright a part 2.