All Comments on 'Hey Nineteen'

More....... sequel.

Love to read more about these two!!!

Great story all around. I've been anticipating this one since you first told me about it and it was even better than my expectations. With all of your stories, I always enjoy the tie-in with Brad's Road Trip (which I consider one of the best stories on this site. It might be time we checked in on Brad & Kelly to see what they're up to now!) Awesome job, my friend, and well-crafted storytelling.

Been a while since you've posted, you should have stayed away. This sucked, thank God I bailed early.

What a exciting story, I hope you continue the story line as well as exploring the whole back door issue. It seems to me she really liked it and possibly exploring more with her anal fantasies. Keep up the good work.

Perfect, sexy, hot story. Brilliant.

Great story. Please have several more parts to this.

I was only going to read the first page and finish it after work. I got so involved with it i spent my lunch break reading.

Thanks for the awesome story.

Please write one. It needs additional chapters, like road trips

Great story hope to see a follow up...

Loved it. Excellent writing.

Didn't read. Seldom read anything over 3 pages, if that. Short with chapters much better.

I loved it. The story had a purpose other than plain sex.

Welcome back! So glad I favorited you eay back when so I wouldn't have missed this story. And while others may complain about the length (they obviously haven't read the 30 chapters of Brad), I think the length allows for wonderfully deep character development. Don't change a thing......except please write more frequently 😀

Brilliant writing and loved the story. Looking forward to more from Houston and Trina!

It's been quite a while after Brad's road trip, but I'm glad you've picked up writing here again.

That was one steamy 'little' story, clearly you've only improved!

Keep it going, and don't make us wait another three years for your next one!

p.s. I really wouldn't mind a follow up to this one.

I really enjoyed everything about this story... When you can, it would be amazing to read more about Trina and Houston... I think they can be so much for each other...despite the age difference...

Great characters and story development. Would love to hear more about these two.

A great story, well written.

Thanks...

Loved your Story. Really awesome but pleeeeeeaaaase continue the story of these two

I loved it. Great story line and characters. Keep it going for awhile. Reminds me of the affair I had last year with an amazing young woman.

Always delivering the best, and still doing so. Thanks for the awesome story!

Very fun and sexy. Trina’s joie de vivre carried the story for me - so young and vital and tough and smart. I’d love to read more about her, see her interact with Houston’s friends, Jessica, Avery, etc. Could make for some good fun drama. Thank you for a great story.

I cannot believe I am just finding you now! You knocked this out of the park. Favoriting the story and the author!

... now what was the address of the grocery store?

So well written and put together. You've created a unique pairing with this story, one that I hope we'll get to read more of. Thank you!

Loved it...

Just love when a couple can be playful...

I thoroughly enjoy your stories so was really happy to see you've returned. An excellent piece of fantasy with loveable characters.Thank you for sharing with us.

Nice read. Great attention to detail. Next installment, her oversexed roommate comes home and begs to fuck him. He has to fight Neanderthal stalker, and ex wife walks in on him and both women fucking up a storm. She joins in, sucking his dick and apologizing. I know, apologizing is definitely way too over the top! It could happen!

This could be the best story on Lit. One has to actually read the dialog to follow the character development and story line to fully enjoy this artful piece of work. BRAVO!!!

Absolutely outstanding. Well written, natural dialogue, mostly realistic sex. Sets a bar that few stories match.

Excellent read, from an ‘old guy’!

Winner, winner..

A great introduction to some fantastic characters!

This story is crying out for a sequel. Trina moving in with him, joining his engineering firm, and meeting the daughter and ex-wife... they could all be interesting scenes.

He also wanted three kids before the ex-wife turned into a super slut and Katrina seems like the accomodating kind of girl who would help him out with that.

Surely you must know this. We are not worthy.

Great story; welcome back! Hopefully not so long a wait for your next one. Thanks!

It was a great May-December story. My only criticism would be all the COVID drivel at the beginning, I almost stopped reading a couple of times. You made your point the first 32 times you referenced it. I hope you continue their story sooner than later, they deserve it.

Now I'm going to have to check out your other stories! This one was fantastic!!

You really need to add more chapters to this story. Maybe they can get together and end up with her nephew, his daughter and then have at least one of their own. Endless possibilites.

Wow, great start on a mature love story. Can't wait for more! Five Stars!

to what could become a multi chapter love story

Love all of your stuff, but your jab at the Astros made this one an automatic hit for me.

A great story, and I really hope you write more on this couple, five stars

Wow really well written with good dialog. Hope there is a sequel very soon

“Grinded” is not a word. You want to be a writer, you have to know this stuff... or at least be willing to crack open a dictionary once in a while.

@Everyone except Anonymous from 10-2 -- Thanks so much for all the kind words and feedback. You've convinced me to do a sequel.. it's not at the front of the line, but it is in line now. Thanks!

@Anonymous 10-2 -- Yep. The actual word would be "ground." Which sounded stupid. So, I used a different word. It's called creative license -- aka, I'm the author, so I can use whatever word I damn well please. Did you notice how literally everyone else who read it knew exactly what I meant, and didn't feel the need to bring it up? I did.

I just went back through some old bank statements, to count up exactly just how much money I made in my days as a professional writer... but I got bored once I got comfortably into the mid six-figure range. So, "if I want to be a writer," I'll probably just contact one of the dozens of organizations who gave me awards or republished my stuff in my previous career. But thanks for your critique though.

I don't know if name-dropping Literotica is a form of breaking the fourth wall, but you managed to do it in a very realistic way and I liked it. I think it'd be interesting if you manage to have the daughter and Trina meet in the second chapter.

I gave this a five star! To be honest, I wasn't too into the story, but I really enjoyed how realistic this story was. This is something that literally could happen and made it very relatable for me. I also really, really enjoyed your writing. Good job! <3

So glad theres going to be a sequel because I really enjoyed the story. Just please dont have a random threesome with the room mate or something. So many stories do this and it ruins it for me.

Excellent story and well worth the top "Mature" story of the month. It made me want more!

Unforgettable characters. Love this story.can't wait for the second chapter anyway.please make it quick.For me it is one of best stories in lit so far.I trust in you.

I live in Columbus and, after a devastating divorce in my mid 30s, I met a very young lady that came on to me very forcefully. So I had my own “hey 19” and loved it. But now I’m fucking 70 years old and know a “hey 19” would, literally, kill me! Lol!

Seriously, I’m a bit bummed that on Literotica 40 is “old” because my 70 year old body is still hooked to a 19 year old libido! I assume this is God’s punishment for my past sins! Lol! Enjoyed the story, keep them coming.

fucking amazing. great story. one of the best ive read here. would love a sequal..but it dont really need one it would only be repetition. very good job. you got a real gift. keep writing

love these two.

I hope you follow up with a sequel

One of the best stories I read. Excellent development of characters also. Add the anal play and don’t worry what people say. Honestly, most people are into it

I'll be honest, the first couple pages I nearly "x" out and went to look for a diff story, but gave it another page or two and I was hooked hard. this turned into a 10 out of 10 story, I loved it.

Bloody loved the details n build up...better than porn n a romantic movie...loved it n thanks..hoping to see more

It took me almost two / thirds of the story to really start enjoying this tale. The first thing that put me off was the age difference, twenty years is a big gap. Then the sex depictions written in the story didn't sound even possible to physically pull off. Gradually I stopped finding the things wrong with the story and began enjoying the bones of the story. The rating just began to rise and by the end I thought it was closer to five stars then four so that's what I gave this story. Thanks.

Loved the story! As a guy who once had a year long relationship with a much younger woman, the story was particularly meaningful. No, she wasn’t jailbait. I was 60 and she was 28, and we had a great time till it was time for it to be over. I still miss that wonderful woman,

Great job on the story, looking forward to a sequel.

It's that witty and sexy and all around good! Sequel sequel sequel!

Definitely need to put the sequel in your plans!

Hope to read further developments.

This NEEDS a sequel.

I think you really, really need to consider writing a sequel!! It can not end there!!

Ok, this was a great story. I like the characters and the plot line. Give them another round. Oh, and NO others involved.

Well written and believable and very hot!

I would really enjoy more of this story. Loved it!

I thought it was realistic and very very good. I would like too hear how things turn out for both of them iin a follow up story. the story was terrific and was well written and oh so sexy --- do write a sequel for sure !~!~!~!~~~~

Really amazing story. I usually don't read anything too lengthy, but it really drew me in. And I agree about creative license, because in my opinion this story was Fan-fucking-tabulous! Lol - Smuttyandfun. Can't give comments anymore without signing in, and my password or user name, I'm not sure which, keeps getting rejected. Just another fun little hitch, along with the scoring and traffic problems lately, I guess. Here's hoping they're resolved soon. And looking forward to reading more of your work.

...I'd be happy to read about a 3-some with Tina's roommate or with whoever. SpotInTheSand would make a tasteful tale of it. Or, maybe even better than a threesome -- Trina could just turn Houston loose with one of her friends who does not get what her big thing is about an older guy.

Parts not particularly my cup of tea:

I). I do not read Anal category.

Through years of reading Literotica, I've come to put up with it in nonanal stories. The light anal in this story was not so bad. Still, I skipped a good deal of that part.

2). I'm not usually one for BDSM.

I do not even get spanking -- giving or receiving.

That was even less my cup of tea than the light anal.

More skipping through the story.

An exceedingly well-written story.

I agree with the author that the "proper" word 'ground' would not fit as well as the "improper" word 'grinded.' Writing is not about following some expert's rules of English and grammar (although sometimes such rules can be quite helpful such as one that SpotInTheSand assiduously followed, namely, to start a new paragraph when dialog changes to a different speaker -- it helped me to know what to expect). Writing is about communicating your ideas in the best way to transfer them to your readers. And if breaking rules helps....

Also.

Excellent use of dialog to carry the story forward.

Recognizing that my peculiar tastes/distates [see 1) and 2) above] are just that: mine -- and that others' tastes differ, I did not rate this interesting story.

Paul in Oklahoma

I have read all your stories, starting with Brad and his adventures, and I love them. I’d love to read a few more if you find some more stories in the back of your mind. I actually do enjoy the dialogue a lot but the sex is always so well articulated that it’s just awesome to read! I agree with Anonymous from 15 days ago, what about a threesome with the girl that doesn’t understand Trina’s fascination with older guys? I would’ve loved to have hooked up to an older guy with as much experience as Houston!

Keep up the good work!!!

Great job! Well written and very hot. Definitely looking forward to a sequel!

More anal play, group or threesome and role playing.

Anyway, thank you and stay safe!

I read several of your stories years ago, and liked them immensely. Going back, I found Milk and Cookies earned 5 stars ... I expect I will find others as I return to your series.

Great to see you back and contributing an excellent story -- here's hoping you will be sharing more in the near future.

It was a great story overall. I only gave it a 4 because you had Houston tease too much at the beginning! Trina was ready and didn't want anymore teasing but Houston continued and continued! It's like tickling someone a little! A little is ok but if you continue it's not fun anymore!

This story checks pretty much all of my boxes. Experienced, considerate guy; strong, confident, articulate woman; sizzling intimacy headed toward soul-connecting love. Would very much enjoy seeing these two again. Bravo.

Got to tell you I enjoyed this story immensely! Great character development. Had no problem with Houston's actions towards Trina. He truly wanted to give her the attention and pleasure he knew she deserved.

DEFINITELY needs to be a sequel/follow up story on these characters.

Again... KUDOS!

I read with an open mind. This was a fun read for me. I too feel that this could be a bit more- a little longer or a sequel a few months to a few years after this event.

Not concerned about the length but find it hard to believe that so much was achieved in a day. Well written throughout and the little bit of anal play and light (ish) spanking didn't put me off as in both cases the seemed to turn Trina on even more. If that part gets more serious I'd be concerned but just putting down a marker in case you do ide to write any sequels. Obviously, plenty of loose ends to tie up, eg. ex wife, daughter, college for Trina, an engineering degree must be a certainty to get involved in his business, etc.

5 stars defo.

I know this is fiction. It touched me where there is a real sense of pain and loss.

I have come to the conclusion that I in a solo ride for the rest of my life.

Guess that is why I come here and read to have dreams.

Now if I could just find a checker/bagger who was interested

Hlw sir! Can you please tell us how long it would take for the next part of this amazing story?

That is the best so far.

I'll admit I'm only on the first page, but was there a point to reiterating like 5 times that one of them men who was groping her was Hispanic/Latino? Very confused as to why that was even a point to be bought up

@Anonymous - Just a descriptor. One guy was white, the other was Hispanic, neither had good shaving habits. That's all. Nothing more to it, i promise.

I remain superbly impressed by how well you wrote out these characters and scene. The sex is definitely beyond incredible but it's the witticisms for me. This is like my 5th read. Definitely a go to for this category.

20% too long, other wise a nice story. your characters are alittle too story book for me. Most of the time what makes us interesting is our imperfections.

This was just wonderful! Great story, great characters and very nice dialogue. You are a really good storyteller and, frankly, I can't wait to read more from you. Keep up the great work!

Great writing. I enjoyed every page!

the best!!

Great story and not too long for me. Really well balanced between the sex and the build up/dialogue. Hope you can keep the story going.

Excellent story. Would really love to see you write a sequel. Thanks

Perfectly built up and then wow delivered... Sequel please

Great! Super romantic and sexy…!!!

This story was amazing!!!

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I have no idea why writers in lit insist of having a several hundred page intro. I like the story to be told without me being told what the story is about and what's in it. Like, imagine if before I commented in this little box, I started droning on about my week for several paragraphs. Just tell the story.

Wow. Great story. Thanks for sharing

Great story!! Sequel? Yes please!!!

Great. More please.

I was completely obsessed with this right of the bat! Fingers crossed there may be a second part? :)

How long we have to wait!!