by m_storyman_x
People are messy, complicated. The story has some parts that are a bit of a stretch of disbelief, but otherwise feels feasible. A woman like Betsy, with her world falling apart around her, could easily fall for the man who supported her, held her, made her feel safe. And that need and desire can be a powerful attraction, both physically and emotionally, so falling for her feels natural. In a lot of ways, his love for Betsy feels more natural than the love for Mandy, who feels a *little* like a user - always getting what she wants.
In any case, I'm still enjoying this story, and I hope it's still continuing.
Life can be very messy and I can understand Betsy's reaction to David's leniency and his caring nature over her parents' deaths. Hard to be incensed by their actions but I do hope Mandy and he make it through what will be a difficult 4 years or so and that Betsy can move on to something good for her.
Still A hot erotic and fun read with a few twists inserted to make it even more fun. 5stars
I loved the mom/son scenes! It was also surprising but pleasing that m_s took my suggestion about incorporating a character index. Now that David and Mandy are at school at opposite ends of the country, will this be the end of the series? Just wondering. Five stars and a favorite point!
Liked the Mom and sister scenes, but not sure I want to hang around for four years worth of these...
Good story. I cant wait for chapter 8 and sees what happens to David and Mandy