by m_storyman_x
A "4" may be a bit generous, but I did not want to be "that guy". This is becoming a bit less entertaining as the chapter count increases. I hope you can put some more engaging content in the future chapter(s).
It's a pity (for me) there's so much cheating... Anyway, it's the author's story, and if that's what he wants...
Failing to see any romance here, more of the MC just sticking his dick in anything that moves. I didn't even read this whole thing and won't read anymore. Nothing wrong with your writing so I won't rate this to lower the score. I'll check out when you post something different
Loved it.
My mum would have shut the door.
ImNext morning she would then say "you should bring your girlfriend for lunch or dinner next week".
Poor kid never seems to get to have much agency in his life. The one time he's active instead of reactive this chapter and he accidentally has sex with his girlfriend's twin. Can't blame him there, if they never told him at all.
Good story. Can't wait to see what will happen in chapter 14. David should have sex with a other girl before he leaves for summer and not use a condom and do a pregnancy scare with her. Or maybe Tina's mom or sister. Or a pregnancy scare with Tina when they are back at schol after the summer. Or better yet a pregnancy scare with Patty
This series had so much potential, I will just read the part where Betsy and David are finally together. Poor writing in terms of the plot
What a fun filled life David has. Is there a woman that he cannot fuck? love this tale
Anon, no firmly on the rails, still predictable, but quicker - a dick dip on every page.