All Comments on 'High School Dates Ch. 23'

Thanks for the new segment.

Cheers

SAGE

An awful lot of double standards and hypocrasy.

The main figure a randy puber.

You broke my heart multiple times with this series.

What an emotional roller-coaster. Fantastic writing and story development. I loved every chapter and could not stop reading it after chapter 4. Excellent work. One of my favorites on this site.

Well written. Could have combine some chapters. Good job

Good story. But it's sad we never know what Mandy's mom gave birth to son or daughter and we never find out what Mandy was carrying a son or daughter and if mandy's ex husband in California had hair or eye color the same as David's and we never found out if Betsy had the same eye or hair color as Mandy if David's son and Mandy's daughter look like like David and Mandy then people will think David and Mandy has 3 babies. Sad thst Mandy's parents are trouble in their marriage. But i really did enjoyed this story. Hope your next one is as good as this one

I agree there was some hippocracy and double standards. At times it was difficult to follow the main character's (or the author's) train of thought.

That being said it was still a good series to read. Something that was done quite well was the morphing of the ...genre...??... the general feel of the story - Started as light hearted teen fucking all his fantasies to slightly more serious college relationships to even more serious mid life.... all the while screwing as many people as possible. Good job