by sr71plt
I guess Andy got lucky twice that day. Very hot sex (apart from the oral after anal bit) and at least they both really enjoyed it. The environmental bit was fun and a nice unexpected twist.
Oh and I hope Andy goes back to the diner and gives the other young guy a fun break at some point.
Nice suspenseful build-up, steamy hot sex between hunky men, fun humorous twist at the end. Big heavy machinery being slung around.
I am trying to read all of the entries and vote to support the other contestants.
Not really my cup of tea but it was well written. I didn't think much of the Earth Day tie in. It seemed almost as if it was a story modified to fit the contest, but it's just my opinion. I've been wrong before.
cant really say you gave me much time to enjoy that, its like it was rushed. writing wasnt that bad, felt like i was there. your story held quite a bit of promise and who doesnt like the idea a hard fucking hung guy getting some on the road? still, 2stars coz i wasnt satisfied :p