All Comments on 'Hiking in the Mountains'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
What a hot tale (tail?)

I never knew mountaineering was so exciting or I would have taken it up years ago.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Ride her

Man you just made me cum twice with this tale.

Why dont u bring her home and ride her mountains till she asks you to stop?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wow

wow thst was great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
!!!! Fabulous !!!!

Wow! What a great read. It made my pussy dripping like hell. I'm drinking a lot of water, so that i could....U know what, PLAY. Please write a mom-son story with more hot & nasty pissing actions.

kvinodkrkvinodkrabout 14 years ago
Awesome One

Its a great story. U made me come many times even i dont know. But if it was either elder and married sister or sister-in-law instead of mom, it would have been much better. But nevertheless, it was great. I really enjoyed it.

RAO123RAO123over 13 years ago
just awesome

This is definitely one of the best stories I have ever read. If you still have the illustrated version, I would really appreciate you sending me a copy. My email is ramrao2007@gmail.com

HermantehkidHermantehkidover 13 years ago
Good

Great story all in all, but I need to speak up for us grammar Nazis. It needs a bunch of work, sentence flow is off, and there are a decent amount of missing words. I needed to go back and read parts of it over again. But, like I said, good story, please submit again.

RAO123RAO123about 13 years ago
This is really this is the best story that i have read . plz plz...................... > send me illustrated version on ramrao2007@gmail.com urgent

This is really this is the best story that i have read . plz plz......................

> send me illustrated version on ramrao2007@gmail.com urgent

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hiking; Wow where do I sign up

Great build up and story please give us more

sail_guysail_guyabout 12 years ago
Excellent story

Well plotted story. In particular I thought the rape scene with the son getting erect despite himself and then licking the semen from his mother was very hot. And her orgasm as well was nicely done. The graphic detail you provided made it excellent stroke material.

Do you have an illustrated version? Some other comments mentioned one.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
You should've put a RAPE tag...

Rape is a horrible thing and you should have listed it in tags so people can decide if they wanna read it... You could have written a much better story without it and without pissing, also mom doesn't act like its a big deal....it is you sick psycho...I hope you get rapped one day

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Coul be better...

Rape was a turn off and left a bad taste to the story... would love more reluctance from mom and son...forced sex yes, but only mom and son engaging in sex... you could have made a kinky master piece out of mommy forced to breed with her hunky son...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Mom and son forced is hot....

You fucked up with the rape hated that...but forcing mom and son to fuck is really hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good but.....

Rape ruined everything...they could have fucked her with a dildo or make her ride a sybian or another girl could have molested or even lightly raped her, but you fucked it up with the rape dude...

ROCKY70ROCKY70almost 5 years ago
W T F !!***!!

MOTHER & SON NOW THAT'S INCEST......THANKS

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
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Go impale yourself upon a spike studded pole, you sick, rape endorsing piece of shit.

Been_That_Done_ThereBeen_That_Done_Thereover 1 year ago

So poorly written, I couldn't finish the first page. Write in your native language or learn English.

chriswjones071chriswjones0715 months ago

After reading the first page I wanted to throw up.

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