All Comments on 'Hired Help'

by magmaman

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
JonTaylorJonTaylorabout 12 years ago
A Simple Tale

Well written. Thank you.

oldwayneoldwayneabout 12 years ago
Quite a good tale.

Thanks for a well written and really good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
like it

good story, but would have liked a longer detailed ending. marriage,happiness,etc.

is she an angel to take on such responisiblity.? plus getting pregnant ? she already had a child. so how would this work out. a second part would be good to clarify .

PTBzzzzPTBzzzzabout 12 years ago
I liked it...

except the last line. That line was a disapointment, one should never settle. I doubt that she feels that way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
a touching story

and so glad that Carmen took him for what he was despite his disabilities....shows you love will win over.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
The last line sucked

How crude, dismissive and sexist can one get?

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
usermagmaman@magmaman
2706 Followers
6', 186#, published writer. I have worn many hats. As a young man I was crazy, carefree and making wads of money. Then along came a messed up war and I was cannon fodder. From there I came home even crazier, and survived a 120 MPH crash which got me 15 years in a wheelchair...

story TAGS