by ZotDragon
Is this really a loving wives tale or is it humor?
I really enjoyed it but the humor is what got me.
Good writing!!
Not normally my cup of tea but I rather liked it. Nicely erotic and fun. Since all parties were knowledgeable of what was going on it worked for me.
I found this to be a very enjoyable, well-written piece.
You are a real writer. Terrific plot engine, excellent internal monologue, and deeply hot. I'm ready to read anything you write. Thanks.
Very hot, not just people fucking, but emotions as well and psychological explorations. I loved it.
I like the mix of emotions, action, thoughts - the whole deal. Well done ZotDragon. It was a great read and so vivid at times. I'm jealous! lol
I always try to close my eyes if I venture into "loving wives" 'cause it's a minefield! Took a chance on this 'cause of the author. Very cool! Funny! Delicious!
Oh, I'm certain such relationships happen, just that they almost always end in tragedy. Making your stories fairy tales. On par with a victim of rape falling in love and marrying her rapist, to live happily ever after. There's a reason fairy tales are most appreciated by children, and people who think like children.
Just enough character development to allow for the intense vicarious pleasure of "being there." Very erotic. Well done. Thank you.