All Comments on 'Hit Ch. 01'

You built this up very well and I see the beginnings of some interesting character development. I'm looking forward to more!

....looks like Josie is only comfortable playing the "man"- I'm sure Pete knows how to ease her into a new "position". I hope.

When the bad stuff hits the spinning thing the men are expected to shovel. In the next chapter Josie will become a true woman and stand behind her man. The idea is to slowly take them both down a devious path, down deep.

Good story , thanks.

story, bringing her out of her shell. Some of my favorite games, flash the shoe seller, and silhouette. Story was a 6 squirter, well at least I did.

The only time a woman should stand behind her man, is when his arse needs to get kicked. If she's not beside him, someone else might take that spot.

Great story. Excuse me - gonna go read rest.

Like unwrapping a Christmas present as these two develop a relationship. Bravo.

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