All Comments on 'Hit Ch. 03'

There is a contrast here between "Show and Tell" D/s behavior and a couple trying to find and trust connection between one another in gentle power exchange. She aches for the safety of being enfolded; he yearns to supply her with that reassurance to keep her from slipping away.

It's a unique story...one that deserves being played out to resolution.

I like it to this point very much.

The next chapter is on its way. This one takes a long time to write as it has to be different from the others. It gets a lot heavier than my usual writing as it progrsses. I have a tendency for happy endings or give in to persuasion to make the woman into a slave or mindless slut. I like writing this stroy but it is more difficult. Please be patient, thanks for reading and commenting, storyteller.

Please finish this story. Have enjoyed reading this so far. Need a happy ending. Thanks.

Have greatest respect for writers on this site. But authors such as this one who intentionally abandon stories after having lured unsuspecting readers to waste their interest and time are truely disgusting vermin. Who would’ve thought that this story would be unfinished after eight years during which this author wrote so many others. But perhaps they also are nasty traps for readers of this site. Will never know as will never waste time on anything this author writes again.

Pop some Prozac or something. Jeepers, you're not the only one who would like this story continued, but you ARE the only one viciously ranting. At least Storyteller isn't dead yet, so there is always a chance the story might get finished. Unless, of course, somebody is really rude & ungrateful & calls him all kinds of nasty names so ST no longer even wants to finish it. Oh, wait, you just did that, didn't you, Horseman?