by magmaman
You were mentioned in the Author's Hangout New Story Review Thread...
Really liked the story, right up untill the part where I realized that a dead man was writting it. Try wounding him badly, knowing how much shit he is in. It would draw the story out further too.
again i didn't expect that! very creative! very different! i liked it! keep writing!
that I've ever heard of would be that careless to not cover their back. Nor would they be foolish enough to get that close to the targeted individual.
but I guess he forgot them. That will the the 1st and last, TK U MLJ LV NV