All Comments on 'Hoff and Hols, a Romance Ch. 01'

Dear Pixie,

I have enjoyed reading many of your first-time themed stories, but this one is particularly nice.

Best friends become lovers in an easy and natural transition. The familiar becomes novel with the emergence of sexual attraction.

The story is narrated with a sense humour. Unlike in some of your other stories, there is no element of humiliation or domination necessary to make you discover the thrills of your sexuality. You feel safe, loved and protected thanks to your friend AK.

I am looking forward to AK returning the favor of expert cuntmunching in the next episode.

It's a rare thing when there's so long between new Pixie stories---I was starting to wonder if you'd abandoned us. Such a relief that you're back. So, my dear little friend, I really enjoyed this first chapter and Hoff and Hols show great promise. While mostly amused, I had a couple of out-loud laughs: "...her mama was almost as big a snob as mine..." and "Sod all, I just want a flash of your pussy." I empathise fully with Pixie's aversion to sports and I always considered PE/sports teachers to be a weird sub-breed as yet unclassified by biologists. As always, five stars joyfully given.

This a very sweet story. I look forward to reading more.

Have only recently started to read your work — my loss, indeed. In a matter of “minutes” (short first chapter), we gain more than a glimpse of the protagonists and context by way of numerous dialogue and crisply written background — flows along so easily. I am hooked on Hoff and Hols.

What a wonderful start to a story and how nice that, as I write this, no one else has yet commented. I thoroughly enjoyed this beautifully written 5 star chapter, wondering whether there will be more, I hope so! Congratulations on a great read my precious. xxxx

Thank you so much, darling Amadeus. I wanted to revisit a memory of something I would love to have happened. I had such a crush on her in real life - the beauty of writing is you can make it happen xxxx

Thank you so much darling. If you look at Evie's Belle series, you will see I have been active there, but it was time for a new one in my own name. I am always delighted to see you get the grace notes of humour I like to add xxxx Part 2 coming up, plus another new one soon xxxxxx

So sweet, it made me cry. Of course, most of your stories do, but sometimes for different reasons. Such a lovely beginning to a longer effort I look forward to reading. You have a gift of reaching down into my heart and pulling out things I did not know I felt. I could hear the waltz from many years ago, in another life. The thrill of looking at your partner and knowing how the night would end. That wonderful anticipation. You bring back so many memories.

As always, with all my love, Mama xxxx

Thank you so much anonymous, I hope you will enjoy further instalments xxxx

I am glad that you have stumbled across me, Migbird, and hope you will continue to enjoy my offerings. I am rather a fan of the Dickens approach - short, sharp chapters with a main theme which carry the story along xxxx

Thank you so much my darling wife, Evie, and as you know, this will go in a direction which will please us both. Love and kisses, your Emily Pixie xxxxxx

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For some reason I am always rooting for Pixie to "win". Maybe it's the "underdog" theory, or maybe it's just wanting Pixie's vulnerable yet generous nature to be rewarded. In this case, Hols is certainly "ample" reward . Of course Hols obviously appreciates the rewards that Pixie offers as well. Cheering for the ladies from across the pond. Their happiness is my happiness. 😊😊😊😊😊

Thank you so much, Mama Serrada, and as you reach my heart, I am glad I can do the same to yours xxxx

Thank you so much anonymous, your support is MUCH appreciated xxxx

This is quite the start, and makes me want to find out where things go between Hoff and Hols. Great writing, as always.

Wonderful start to a new story, Pixie

Lovely build up in just a short chapter that culminated in a super climax of Hoffs and Hols “finding” each other and having some excellent love-making.

Was good to see the Fergie recognised that Pix was “one of us” and also listed after AK.

Look forward to the next story and whatever direction you choose to take it

Thank you so much, darling OneAuthor - and things will hot up even more in chapter 2 xxx

Thank you Wiz, as you know, I like to keep the chapters short and (I hope) sweet. More to come soon xxx

Very good. The usual Hoff excellence. Bravo!

Thank you very much, eva - much appreciated xxxx

Sweet ...... H&H a new brand ...... After years love appears, not the first timer ...... 💖

Thank you, Franziska, I hope you will enjoy the story as it unfolds xxxxx

Excellent!!! Looking forward to so much with H&H! Dreamy 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Thank you so much, Aoife xxxxx

Looking forward to reading the rest of the series, blushes red, wondeful story Pixie, xx

Thank you so much, Riley xxxxx

💋🌹💋 We Love It!

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Hallo Pixie!

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Thank you for your recommendation, it's just lovely,,, yes!

Things have been a bit hectic here with Jackie getting her artificial intelligence (AI) projects ready for the next text convention / conference, and my work at Joe's training facility.

So far Queen Jackie and I have only read the first chapter.

However by the time you read this we probably will have finished reading 5 or 6 more chapters, as I told you Love, my Queen isn't real big on patients, and my translating English to German then the comments back into English takes time.

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Here's something that caught our attention, [It was as though she was "my AK" and I didn't want those slimy men touching her.] _ Jackie smiled remembering a sports bar in San Francisco, where some jackass was trying to pick her up... Jackie told him no thanks, and kissing me said you're not my type.

Queen Jackie is too polite, myself I never have suffered from that problem.

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Even though there is no "rampant schoolgirl lesbianism."... Sad face 😥... "Hoff and Hols" is a beautiful story!... Thank you again, (5&5) 5-Stars and 5-Wet Orgasms, yum-yum.

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From your two kinky dyke friends,

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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

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Thank you so much my darlings xxxxxxx