All Comments on 'Hoff and Hols, a Romance Ch. 02'

Developing nicely….

…. How jealous will Pix be when she realises AK has been anally fucked by a guy? Will AK enjoy the experience or realise that it’s so much better with the tit-less Squirt??!!

Thank you for being such an obliging person and serving us with this deliciously hot 5 star chapter. Like AK it had a lot in it and it made me tingle in exactly the right place. Congratulations on another delicious knicker changing serving, I love it! xxxx

So sweet and so innocent. Learning about love and each other. Makes me weepy while I smile. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Among other things, Pixie, you've given a whole new meaning to 'a midnight feast in the dorm'. I could just see Enid Blyton reading this and having a fit of the vapours (not to mention Hoff's hide-bound parents). I must say AK's vocabulary is quite startling, I take it she's been reading a lot of D H Lawrence in her spare time. And I hope that Crispin appreciates the vigorous training programme AK's been through to please his adolescent lusts. Fun as always, Pixie, although I doubt the Education Secretary would be amused. Five more stars on your Pixie's Walk of Fame.

By the way, is 'shot-eating grin' a new euphemism for something or a simple typo?

Daring Maonaigh, as always, thank you for your fun comments. It is, giggles, a new euphemism, as you will see in chapter 3 - "shots" can be "eaten" from a variety of places. Hoff is clearly being led astray, or is it the other way around? You will in part three that Crispin is duly appreciative xxxx

Darling MamaS, so glad that you are enjoying this xxxx

My precious and most darling Evie, I am glad that you have found this a "tingling" read, it allows us to explore fresh dimensions xxxx

Dear Wiz, as you know, I always like to leave the reader with a cliff-hanger - so you will find out in the third chapter of their adventures xxxx

A delightfully erotic reconfiguration of “romance” — these two feed off each other figuratively and … . Thoroughly enjoying your creative enjoyment. 5 stars of course.

...with a side of giggles. Yes, I smiled and chuckled my way through your scrumptious buffet of prose. This was a fantastic second chapter that is making me hungry for a third helping. :)

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"HOFF AND HOLS, A ROMANCE". Why do I get the feeling that this title was a little Pixie poke at traditional lesbian "romance" stories. Pixie preparing AK for her impending anal deflowering is NOT typical lesbian "romance" content. The narrative definitely challenges preconceptions of what a lesbian romance story looks like. I can't wait to see how AK's liaison with a "Quentin" influences the ladie's relationship moving forward. Captivating storytelling as usual. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

I thought you write erotica, Pix, but this is fucking porn! Of the very best kind.

'nuff said.

Thank you, dear Migbird, and I am so glad that you are enjoying the fun xxx

Thank you, darling OneAuthor, I am having fun, and so glad you and other readers are in on it too xxxx

A lovely story so far! AK is definitely the type of girl to bring home to mother, if for nothing but to create some kinky scenarios in the guest room!

Wow will the Hoff take control of the AK? Show no mercy.

Giggles, what a great comment shark xxxx

Thank you eva, well you will see in the next chapter xxxxx

Well what can I possibly say that's not been said already? Beautifully written and capturing so many things. I'm looking forward to part 3.

Thank you, darling xxxx

Giggles, thank you darling Amadeus, you raise an interesting question of the divide between erotica and porn xxx

Thank you, Anonymous - yes, it was, and comes out of conversations with a very dear friend, who, contrary to what might called the Vanilla Knickers line, rather enjoys anal xxxx

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Yes, anal play is certainly not outside of "Vanilla" lesbian romance, but Pix prepping AK for an anal session with a "Quentin" IS a bit outside the norm. I'm always filled with trepidation when a male love interest is introduced into a lesbian "romance", but this is not a typical lesbian "romance", and Pixie and AK are not the typical principles. The special relationship Pixie and AK share is separate from any other dalliances, and hopefully that separation insulates them from the hurt and jealousy that could easily accompany such an atypical arrangement. I have faith that their relationship will survive any outside interests.

Thank you, Anonymous, the friend on whom Hols is based rather enjoys the unusual, which gives me an opportunity to explore this kink from the female side of it. Quite how she came by it is, perhaps, another question, but then she is bi xxxxx

Apologies for missing your earlier comment wiz, well you will find out soon xxxx

A churches school teachings ....... Christening before university hard life being started ...... 🙄

Enjoy, my darling xxxxx

This is absolutely wonderful how they are open, lustful then romantic in their love. I smiled brightly at the Australian kissing, I hadn’t heard that in years.

Pixie, your writing as always is phenomenal, your use of the language is masterful drawing me into every sentence. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Thank you, Aoife, as you can tell, I loved writing this series and am glad it gives you such pleasure xxxxx

So may new experiences, being able to read this with someone very special is just another of them, thank you so much for sharing this with us.

Riley xxx

Thank you Riley. I am sure reading it with your new gf is an exciting experience xxxxx

Beautifully Written Hot and Sexy! 💋

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The ["Australian kiss!"] ­­_ I worked at a spa with a woman that everyone called Aussie, and she used that term... I really thought it was something she had made up!

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Thank you, 5-Stars and 5-Orgasms for another beautifully written hot and sexy chapter.

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From your two kinky dyke friends,

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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

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Thank you so much, my darlings 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟💋