All Comments on 'Hoff and Hols, a Romance Ch. 03'

Haha, great ending to the chapter.

This one felt a little rushed and did not have the same build up to each of the main (sex) events, but still highly enjoyable and entertaining.

How childish was that, indeed? Thanks, Pixie, for my first laugh of the morning. And thanks for being kind to Amanda when she has previously shown nothing but scorn. You may be small in stature but there's no denying you have a huge, huge heart. A brief word: your duet with AK should come with a health warning and it's this---don't sing this ditty in the Bible Belt, you might come away with more than your reputation in tatters. Five star fun as ever!

Although I was a bit sad for Hoff when she saw Hols with Crispin, this was another fun chapter. I liked that Hoff comforted Amanda, and showed her that indeed good things can come in little packages. Finally, the song that Hofs and Hols performed was hilarious. Definitely worth any hell they had to pay! :)

Well, I enjoyed the story until it came to the concert given by the leaving sixth form and then I could barely read at all due to belly laughs and watering eyes. And so naturally I had to read it again, and again! To call this wonderful 5 star offering entertaining isn't doing it justice, it is fabulously creative and compelling because every sentence made me want to read the next. Brilliant writing darling, absolutely brilliant, congratulations. xxxx

Thank you, darling Maonaigh - yes, the song is great fun, but not to be sung in the Bible belt. As you will see in the next chapter, there are consequences for Hoff and Hols xxxxx

Thank you wiz, I hope you will enjoy the next chapter xxxxx

What I like about Pixiehoff's stories most is that while the main theme is there all the time they are very believable and not like a cookie cutter assembly line like some of the prolific authors are. I will give your work yet another ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. Hope to read a lot more of your reminiscences. As always thanks for sharing

Thank you, darling OneAuthor, and I am always glad to see your comments - and that have enjoyed this so far. The next chapter has been submitted so should be up soonish xxxxx

My most precious darling Evie, thank you, for being you, for your comments (which are wonderful) and for all your support and encouragement. I'd urge any of my readers to follow your stories xxxxx

Thank you so much, Cupertino, I really appreciate that. I love knowing that readers appreciate what I write, and it encourages me so very much xxxxx

Another daring episode!

Lex mihi ars, as my Latin teacher used to say.

I suppose this was the PG-rated version of the story. The scene where AK squats and pushes out the butt plug must have barely escaped the censors.

But in my imagined R-rated version Pixie also cums on Amanda's thankful tongue. Pixie reciprocates the next morning, just before finding AK being pondered analytically. Then they share Crispin's cream without bothering with mouthwash. This way they taste each other's lover in their mutual kiss. AK's anus shall also be licked, because we know that semen must not be wasted, lest we commit the sin of Onan.

Pixie, please forgive me for my totally inappropriate thoughts. Somehow this story unleashed too much of my imagination.

Next time on Hoff & Hols: punishment for the insolent lyrics, hopefully administered by a stern schoolmistress ...

My darling Amadeus, I am glad it unleashed such deliciously naughty thoughts, and know that the friend upon whom Hols is based would have loved that. The next chapter has been submitted, and you will soon see what followed xxxxx

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Hols brushed her teeth and used mouthwash before she kissed Hoff.after giving "Crispin" head. How romantic. *chuckles*. The narrative is a bit schizophrenic with all the sexual partners and mixed genders, along with the genuine attempt at conveying a special romantic relationship between Pix and AK, but life at that age tends to be messy and chaotic, so it works. The bawdy song was definitely irreverent, and it would likely earn equal measures of fame and infamy depending on the audience. I can only imagine where the ladies relationship goes from here ? ? ? ? ? .

Thank you, Anonymous, I am glad to have conveyed something of the messiness of that stage - and watch for where it goes from here xxxxx

OMG .... burn the bridges ... chop up the cinders ... mix the paste into slurry and dump in a hole. Well, I guess it is one way to leave an impression on a school.

It is painful sometimes when an end comes, and if not an end, a change. Change is our only constant, and poor Hoff learned early that even those we love will move through our lives. I suppose we must cherish what we can and release the rest to the winds.

Sad chapter, but a good one. As always, I am in awe.

Thank you, darling MamaS - I try to deal with the good, and the bad xxxxx

Pixiehoff ...... You changed your story telling dramatical in concentration of the main event in our Society - sex, sexual activities in every page , respect ...... H&H now at York and Oxford, but does it last this way, can they keep the concentration on theyr studys for A's or will it be Ahs and Ohs

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I am glad you are enjoying this Franziska xxx

Learning new words and songs, great writing. Love it when i rather read than sleep

Wonderful to see and feel these two. Loved how they made their mark while walking out the door. Just beautiful Pixie 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Thank you, Aoife, I am so glad you are loving this xxxxx

We Love your stories,,, Yes! 💋

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Hallo Pixie!

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Well Love, unlike AK and at least one of your other readers, "amadeuserotic"... showering and brushing her teeth and using a little mouthwash, just won't do it!

Before we get into bed, she's going to use my enema bag... I want all traces of Crapsin gone, I don't want to see him, smell him and definitely not taste his filthy vial seed!

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Pixie Love, you really had me going, I was about to start re-translating to find where I screwed-up, because I knew... no singers from that time would have sang a song with those lyrics.

When Jackie ask me what's wrong?

It's the song, I don't believe "Garfunkel and Oates", would have ever sang anything like that!

Your thinking of "Simon and Garfunkel"... these are two women about our age, just google "Garfunkel and Oates" and see for your self what kind of songs they sing.

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I wasn't fast enough so Jackie played it for me... fuck, I can just imagine the looks they got from the teachers and other students.

Now if I had gone to a regular school like Jackie, and the songs were about lesbians, oh fuck yeah, I would've done it for-sure!

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Thank you, 5-More Stars and 5-More Orgasms.

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From your two kinky dyke friends,

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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

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