All Comments on 'Hoff and Hols, a Romance Ch. 05'

As usual you have given us a 5 star offering. A beautifully written chapter with plenty of detail to draw me in while you introduce new characters in a different setting mixed with those from school life. Thank you xxxx

I'm going off at a little tangent first of all, Pixie. In Chapter 01 you wrote that AK's Mama was almost as big a snob as your own. In this chapter you say that even your Mama "...acknowledged you had done something worthwhile..." Where I'm going with this is that given your Mama's apparent nature, there must be an interesting back-story, something that has perhaps helped shape Pixie and might make a fun and readable storyline. Why not think about it? As for the rest of this chapter, very enjoyable as ever. A great pity there wasn't a bunch of rugby players there to admonish Chloe's would-be molesters. And the awakening of the hung-over trio should be vastly entertaining. Another five stars---keep going and you'll soon have your own Zodiac.

Oh Pixie, the delight continues! So light and breezy, so erudite and British, so cute and positive. A real treat.

Every ending is a new beginning!

What serendipity, Darling Pixie, to have met and rescued Chloe!

But are English boys really as hapless as described in this story? Let's see.

1. Some seem to conceive of only one way to seduce a girl by getting them drunk and drugged.

2. Others seem to be interested in only one thing more than in girls: getting drunk themselves.

3. Then there are the gay ones, but they get nothing but dick.

Perhaps your good deeds will go a long way towards converting both AK and Chloe to the church of Sappho. Following the example of the One who said: when 2 or 3 are gathered in my name, I am right amongst them ...

Can't wait to learn what happened the morning after. Perhaps Hols will narrate it for you, since you chose not to stick around.

I am also eager to learn what Emma has to say about sex from a theological perspective.

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Thank you, as always, darling Amadeus. On English boys, alas I must plead ignorance, but AK and Chloe certainly have an alternative - and yes, Mthr Emma will, indeed, be guiding Pixie in the next chapter xxxxx

Thank you, Only_connect, I like to think I can keep up the light tone, whilst staying erotic, so thanks for the support - much appreciated xxxxx

Well, my darling Maonaigh, Mama will be making an appearance, probably in the next chapter, with something of the back-story - so we are, as ever, aligned xxxxx

Thank you, my darling Evie, and I do hope it added to your "tingle" factor xxxxx

Indeed, an interesting morning and from whose perspective. Like essentially everyone else, caught up in this storyline as I wonder about Hoff’s feelings and caught up in the way you bring out emotions in your readers. More, please. 5 stars of course.

Very nice chapter! I agree with Moanaigh. I would love to see more backstory on little Pixie's Mama. Also, I love how her mother is mentioned in so many stories as if to suggest her relationship with her mother has played a big role in Pixie's quest. Maybe part of Pixie's desire for certain women is that that lovely maternal comfort they provide. Thanks as always!

I find it very intriguing (and fascinating) how some of your stories touch upon theology against the background of your sexuality. I am of the mind that one's attraction to any (or all) genders should not impact one's religious beliefs... or their ability to be a leader in that branch of theology. Oh, and the rest of the chapter was wonderful as well. Pixie ending up saving Crispin's twin sister, and then what happened in the scene near the end... that was quite the turn of events. "It could be an interesting morning when they all woke" is like saying -30c could be a "a bit chilly". :)

Thank you, dear Migbird, and the next chapter will give more on Hoff's feelings xxxxx

Darling Sharkshark, yes, there is much in that - indeed a very great deal, and more will be revealed soon xxxxxx

I am new to your stories. Wonderful, intelligent and amusing. Will follow you more.

Thank you, darling OneAuthor. As I confessed, I had doubts about continuing, but am so enjoying it that I just had to. In terms of the theology, well shall we just say that my personal circumstances are such that it is a question which concerns me deeply, and along with others, I am working to see whether we can change the minds of our hierarchy - either that or I am off to Wales (where they allow us to be open). I am glad you like Chloe, she will be back - and forward, of course! xxxxx

thank you so much, avatar, hope you enjoy them xxxx

Another rather schizophrenic chapter that ended up generating more questions than answers. I always get frustrated when I can't really see where a Pixie story's is heading;. Maybe it's because I'm worried about Pixie getting hurt along the way. Or maybe it's because I want a version of a "HEA" for Pixie that ldoesn't conform to her idea of a "HEA". There's a lot of kinky / taboo action going on in this story, which, while being very erotic, is fraught with unforeseen complications. I hope Pixie can navigate the tricky waters she's entering. And I barely know Chloe, but I'm a bit concerned about how she will handle things in the morning light. If her brother was t involved I would be less uncomfortable. It should be interesting to see how the rest of the story unravels. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

Thank you, Anonymous. This is a complex one with some twists and turns to come, so be patient, but Pixie usually manages to find her way through xxxxx

So glad you continued this series. Hof is an interesting and engaging character, I hope things end well for her ;) xxx

Thank you, Shampoofet, I am so pleased to have affirmation that it was the right decision - thank you xxxxx

I keep wanting to start with wow. It is getting old so I will simply let it be.

AK seems oblivious to the pain that her behavior would cause, did she not care at all for Pixie? She seems so unfeeling of the pain that her actions would cause, I suppose I am projecting, and perhaps Pixie is more forgiving and understanding than I am. My heart hurt for her, which made me realize that lovely PixieHoff had done it again, I was not skimming but reading every word. I am in awe.

Thank you, darling MamaS. This is a long burn, and as it goes on, you will see that AK's love is real xxxxx

Quick step down into the gutter...... Not even talking about her "new" crispin ...... Harsh landing ...... And Chloe, wow , just jumping AK bones with her brother next to them and in the knowledge of pixies past with AK ...... And pixie cleans the tables, as lovely as ever ...... Yes AK causes pain in pixies gut SerradaC ...... You can't buy love

Just another lifetime reality knowledge lesson 💝💝💝💝💝💝

There is, as in every life, a roller-coaster to ride - glad you are on the ride with us xxx

Wow poor Pix, hopeful she gets into a relationship

Hmm delicious but sad dear Pixie didn’t stay to enjoy the wake up… as just a viewer. Excellent story as always Pixie 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Thank you for your appreciation darling Aoife xxxxx

💃🏿 & 💃🏼 We Loved It,,, Yes!

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Hallo Pixie!

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Queen Jackie and I, have enjoyed reading 27 of your beautifully written hot sexy stories, along with a number of your beautiful poems one of which had me so emotional, that I could hardly comment....I think you remember the poem I speek of?

We are currently reading "Hoff and Hols", and at the risk of embarrassing you....I'll say it again, reading one of your stories is like we're right there in the room watching it unfold,,, yes!

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Pix may be short in stature but she's big in courage....facing down three guys by herself, when she couldn't be sure of Lisa's help....after Lisa advised giving it a miss, the boy's would help her. ... Oh yeah, they were planning to help Chloe alright....it's lucky for Chloe that Pic, came along when she did and didn't follow Lisa's advice.

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By the by....what is a Police beeper, is it like a Police radio scanner?

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Queen Jackie, said the concept of a (Saturday night "knickers run."), is cute, and not totally without merit!

They could have used something like that at my college, it might have avoided a few pregnancies!... Kat, you ever heard of it before?

I don't know how she got the idea that I'd know anything about the goings on in European Christian Boarding Schools. ... Being that I was raised in a all girls group home... and that's about two steps above jail!

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Thank-You, 5-Stars and 5-Orgasms,,, yes!

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From two of your kinky dyke friends,

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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

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