by eoins1
It's nice to see a story of this genre which doesn't rush to the action. I thought the pace of the story was perfect, and added credence to the actions of a couple who wouldn't normally do this sort of thing. Moving hastily into the 'money shot' would have ruined this for me.
Well written story, and hot too! The anticipation leading up to the inevitable conclusion was most delicious... By all means keep writing. We look forward to reading more of your work.
Apart from a few allusions, the fact that one of them was black didn't interfere with the slow build up of eroticism in this charged story.
Such a shame that so many sad people have to become bitter about what turns on others. They really would do better by not reading stories on subjects which don't appeal to them personally.
I was surprised not to read more encouraging remarks from anyone - it's usually a popular theme. I liked it. Pay no attention to the wankers. Keep writing
Nice plot,good story.To bad some of the comments left on here are from readers that probably can not even spell let alone write. Keep up the good work. Robby
Thanks for your story. Well written. Nice build up to the story.
Congratulations on aggravating the rednecks too! Well done! Very funny comments. I wonder what combination of IQ, personal issues and story line triggers it takes to rile them?
I have an issue of wife sharing, interracial sex and swinging!
I LOVE IT! If I ever ger married agasin it will be an essential subject of agreement with my wife
I am copy pasting this comment because I really liked it.
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Yusaku - over 15 years ago
Excellent
Well written story, and hot too! The anticipation leading up to the inevitable conclusion was most delicious... By all means keep writing. We look forward to reading more of your work.
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A five star story: 4.75 = 95% (*****).
I LOVE this story very very much! It is is my kind of ménage à trois. A tour de force!
I gave you a 5.0 (100%, ☆☆☆☆☆).