All Comments on 'Holly and Lilly'

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Very nice! Now I really wish I had a sister - but my g/f has two, and you've given me a couple of extremely wicked ideas...

---that I've seen in this genre - lovely descriptions, sexy and with touches of humour. Hell's teeth, I wish I was a woman and that I had a sister. Perhaps the story hasn't been left in a suitable situation for a continuation, which is a pity, but maybe you are clever enough to provide a plausible one. However, I do hope you will dip into this area again, because it's clear that between the two of you the results of co-operation are brilliant. Thanks for so much pleasure. Freddy the Brit

that was so hot, i wish i had a sister.

Just IMO, you could have taken a little bit more time fleshing this out. The sex is all good, but there's very little meat here to satisfy. All in all a decent story.