All Comments on 'Holly, Mom and Daughter'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Excellent story

I think we definitely need to see where it goes from here please!

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
Ok

Even though this was written good, and there was only that one slap from Holly, in my opinion if i was Alice I would have told Holly to leave, and they say a man only thinks with his little head, and seeing how Alice is a woman, I wonder what she is thinking with, as well as Karen and Holly, but we will find out

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
but

I guess if Alice did tell Holly to leave that next day after her party, then the story would have ended there, and it would have not had the daughter in it as it did in the last page, oh well lets see where this is heading, as long as there is no BDSM in it, I am sure it can't be all bad

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Excellent start

Really liked this, however I would like some BDSM in this..Hope there is more

excraiexcraiover 7 years ago

I just recently came upon your stories and have read most of them and i just love them. The ones i haven;t read yet i will read soon. I love this story sooo much. Please keep them cumming and i will too.

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