All Comments on 'Home Alone'

Not one of your best sr sorry to say it but this lacked your usual panache and style

loved it!

May not be one of the best but it still rates a 5. Kept me hard.

Okay, it might not have been the best story on the site but it's a long way from the worst. I love stories where a husband cheats on his wife... but with another man, not a woman. When I get time away from the wife and children (not very often) I always go for cock over pussy: less complicated and the sex is SO much better!

I don't write for just one reader or one brand of reader. And I think I post quite enough to cover a wide range of readers. I might note that this story has racked up views and votes faster than anything else I've posted this year--so, since I post more literary and more complex ones too--some of which are being rated much lower than this one--I'll have to go with being happy that a large segment of the GM readers here are just fine with this one being included in my portfolio. I'd actually say that if I wanted to maximize readership of GM stories at Literotica, I'd write them all like this one.

Got me hard. When are you writing the next chapter?

I enjoyed it.