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writerannabellewriterannabelleover 6 years agoAuthor
I Hope You Liked It!

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A special thanks to the Lit community for making me feel so welcome. I love your feedback, and your enthusiasm.

JohnCKJohnCKover 6 years ago
Mike

Really must apologise to the banshee, i mean he can't avoid her forever. Besides it's only good manners, a pissed off banshee is no fun to have around. :)

Now comes the wait for next episode, *sigh*

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
So far...

Great concept, fun characters, can't wait to see where it goes next. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Another good chapter with enjoyable characters.The stomach bulge from his dick was really hot.

jwbailey00jwbailey00over 6 years ago

Another great chapter, can't wait for the next one!

TJSkywindTJSkywindover 6 years ago
Nice entry

Pun intended if you like.

Don't forget to spellcheck before submitting. A couple of bugaboos, but great story.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love this!

Keep it up, great concept, great characters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love the story!

The only complaint I have is waiting for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Keep it up! good tale

ipreferoralipreferoralover 6 years ago
Great imagination!

We also see Mike maturing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Enjoying

Nice . Really enjoying reading your work

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Can only quote Naia

God, that was so fucking hot!

loved the description of Tink, familiar from "regular" stories but differ enough to make her attractive.

Waiting to read the next girl!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A new favourite series

Looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
GREAT READING ENTERTAINMENT, THANK YOU FOR YOUR WONDERFUL STORY.

Very good, love your work, please keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love

I'm loving this story. Keep it up and keep offering more horny, sexy monsters.

ender2k2kender2k2kover 6 years ago
Really entertaining story.

I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks

wdelanderwdelanderover 6 years ago
One of the most imaginative stories in a long time

I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you continue to reveal most about the house and its background.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You rock!

Fantastic entry into your hundred plus chapter novel! (wink wink nudge nudge)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Cant wait to see what is next

I cant wait to see what happens with this story, keep writing you creative lady :) I am glad you decided to write publicy. Bravo! - ck

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story

I love the idea and the horny monsters

I am looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

nice job and they are starting to become longer. The longer the better for me, it lets me get into the story and stay there a bit before having to end.

LustKnightLustKnightover 6 years ago
Enjoying the story so far!

...did I see some inspiration from Laurell Hamilton's "Merry Gentry" novels in your depiction of the goblin? =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Awesome Story with Tinker the cutest Monster ever 10 Stars if possible

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keeps getting better

Each chapter is better than the next keep them coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Another great chapter, thanks. :)

NighttymstoriesNighttymstoriesover 6 years ago
Going great!

You are doing a great job keeping your audience interested and engaged. Another good chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

The best monster girl story I've ever read. Please keep it going, amazing job

JobeiJobeiover 6 years ago
Awesome start

So far loving this series. Original and fun to read. Please keep it up!!

RobbMannRobbMannover 6 years ago
Good Fun

Enjoying this story. looking forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great start

this is the best series in a long time.Keep up the great work and I look forward to many more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excellent story!

I forgot I had read the First chapter. Missed the second, until I read it after reading this chapter. Please continue this series.

SpellsAnonymousSpellsAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please. More

So far this series seems absolutely amaxing. Please continue writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thank you!

I appreciated yoy being coy with the chapter title. Thoroughly enjoying your work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More

Please don’t stop I want more more more

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Need more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
10/10

i will literally read this forever

MakicMattMakicMattover 6 years ago
Monster girls with heart

Usually when a monster girl story is written, there isn't much love put into it. You put that love here. I can tell how much you like writing these, and these sex scenes are amazing. Please keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Another five stars for you

I gave your story five stars...but only because I was not able to give it the ten stars that it deserves.

I was disappointed with one aspect of your story, the part where I got to page three..I had hoped that it would go to to page nineteen or so.

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
love it

L O V E I T

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Another great read... I'm looking forward to seeing what other ladies you might add; and a few I'm hoping you'll add, as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!

Your story is amazing and it gets me hot every time I read! I am constantly looking forward to knew chapters so please please please keep writing!! Xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice Read

Annabelle

Nice prose and I like your storyline. Please keep at it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Great story! be sure to label this chapter with a goblin tag! Goblin girls need love too!

workingpartyworkingpartyover 6 years ago
Great story

Wonderful I am enjoying the building of the over all story as well as the monster sex. I look forward to your next chapter. Thank you for sharing your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sweet

Great work. Each installment becomes my favorite!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Refreshing: a wonderful change from the typical stories

I absolutely love the characters so far. Humor and fun with sexiness: nothing is better!

arrowglassarrowglassover 6 years ago
Great yarn!

I look forward to who you come up with next!

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53over 6 years ago
😀. Excellent So Far

A whimsical and fun story line. Keep it up. 😀

LonesomeBoy60LonesomeBoy60over 6 years ago
Luv'd it!

That was FUN, do it again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This is fun

What a unique theme. Congratulations on creating a new genre.

I look forward to reading the rest of the series. You have left so many potential trails to follow. This is going to be a fun read.

baileytommybaileytommyover 6 years ago
fairy lay

sofar it's a really cute story I like it,keep it going.A GOOD READ!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Success

All lovely ladies in a row of superb talents

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Best story line

Thank you so very much. You are a wonderful author and i sincerely hope you write out this story to a happy end. In ,say, another 20 or so chapters. 😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This is greatness

Keep up the great work!

auhunter04auhunter04over 6 years ago

I think you have created a wonderful monster here-- a never ending story with all sorts of surprises and events

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

You're one hell of a writer I hope this story continues for a while

EzDemon187EzDemon187over 6 years ago
Tink is awesome

Great chapter, I am hooked. The little goblin sounds super cute and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Firmhands5Firmhands5over 6 years ago
Smitten

What a beginning - Great style and sensually graphic -

ShademullerShademullerover 6 years ago
Tink

Absolutely my favourite monster, hope to see a lot more of her.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
Each chapter adds new quirkiness

More fun perspectives on even more new additions to the slowly expanding collection of monsters. Each discovery comes with their own personality and their own rules/laws.

Fun.

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStoneover 6 years ago
Sweet, Romantic, Sexy, and Fun

This was very sweet, and the sex was still hot. This chapter lacked any connection to the Muggle World. I enjoy the tension between the two worlds.

SashaPozaSashaPozaover 6 years ago
Wasn't sure...

When I first started this series, I wasn't sure how i'd care for it. Now, I can't wait to continue it! Well written, great characters and intermingling! Hope Cecilia comes back into the story soon as I'd like Mike to get over being scared of her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Really

It was good it was well do

Dose the droll mean any thing will it be a problem

244Jake244Jakeover 6 years ago
Each mini book gets better & better

Yes. It’s going to be fun book to read ⭕️

Imperator_9Imperator_9about 6 years ago
Pretty much perfect

Playful, fun, but with a serious romantic heart, this is quickly becoming my favourite series. The basic idea of this series is fairly straightforward, but the devil is in the detail and the richness of your vision is what makes this story so memorable. This chapter really *touched* me. Think's determination to fuck her new husband properly and Naia's determination to help her "little sister" out were beautifully handled and just added to the sheer power of that final encounter in the bath.

Dammit, but this is great stuff. Definitely a story to savour...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
You need to write 100+ chapters just like Tefler!

I love your horny monster series!!

aimingtomisbehave33aimingtomisbehave33almost 6 years ago
Fantastic

I don't comment much, but I just had to for this one. Love the writing, your ability to bring images to life, characterization that's developing and how you're willing to go weird without losing any of the sexiness. Tink could've gone any number of ways in less talented hands, and I'm happy for how sweet and steamy it turned out to be. Definitely look forward to reading more from here!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
So much fun to read !!!! Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.

MORE, MORE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
WOW

This is a great story... outstanding job keep it up

texguy73texguy73almost 6 years ago

Absolutely love it! You paint a picture with awesome detail

writerannabellewriterannabelleover 5 years agoAuthor
Official Word From Annabelle

Hi all!

If you are enjoying this story, I wanted to let you know that Book One of Home for Horny Monsters is on sale at Amazon. It consists of Chapters 1-12 and has been professionally edited!

https://www.amazon.com/Radleys-Horny-Monsters-Annabelle-Hawthorne/dp/194965401X

Feel free to keep reading it here as well, but thought you would like to know! Check my bio for a link to my websites (including my Patreon) if you want to see what I've been working on.

JzznJzznabout 5 years ago

That was so hot, I should wait till I can think straight again. I just don't want to forget to send one.

FireskyFireskyalmost 5 years ago
Wow

I think this would be awesome as an illustrated book! I didn’t see your book on Amazon though.

c4vetteman94c4vetteman94almost 5 years ago
Rereading entire series so I thought I would add my thoughts along the way

Such a great series, it's been my favorite series since I read it the first time. These first 3 chapters really do a good job of setting up the main characters. Love Tink, she is my favorite. My favorite moment is definitely the first Tink and Mike encounter, I felt so bad for Tink when she lost the fight. And never change the way she talks, it's perfect. On to the next chapters.

DawelderDawelderalmost 5 years ago
So far Great

I just found your stories today and while I don't normally say much I have to say you are REALLY VERY GOOD. I will be reading them all

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What a wonderful well written story

I am entranced by your well written story. So Far each of these characters is fascinating and I want to know more and more. I do hope you continue this story to conclusion hopefully after many, many, many chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love these stories

I absolutely love these stories! Thank you for sharing them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
New Reader, and I Love your work so far!

This series has been on my 'to read list' for ages and I'm glad I've finally gotten around to it because even though I've only just began I already rate this as one of my top 5 favorite series on Lit!

EyeOfTheBeholderEyeOfTheBeholderover 4 years ago
Wow

Ok, that was hot. I'm hooked. Tink seems like a firecracker.

Dl_lmmieDl_lmmieover 4 years ago
Tink is awesome

Naia is wonderful, but I like the charm and humor of Think. She is a little go-get-her!

Enjoying this do much. Thank you!

Grimjack01Grimjack01over 4 years ago
Interesting new monster

Nice addition to the monster group, Tink looks like a fun addition going forward.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Bravo!

Brilliant concept well executed. I’only 3 chapters in and I’m already hooked.

DelsetDelsetalmost 4 years ago
Friggin sweet!

I am *loving* this story. The world building has a cool balance with the playful steamy sexy times. I'm just getting started and totally hooked!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excellent!

Blinking good story, very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

What a great story, I hope there's many more to come!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Amazing story!

Wow!! I'm so glad I stumbled upon this on reddit!! Its SOO GOOD!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This is the shit I'm into.

chairfanchairfanover 3 years ago
Great writing

Normally I'm not really into NonHuman as a fetish, but the writing style and story is something that I can enjoy as a piece of literature.

RRC2RRC2over 3 years ago

Well, I'm completely in love with Tink. She is adorable.

Which is to say she was created by a fantastic author. The author has a wonderful sense of humor, and sensibilities, and they make this chapter shine like a diamond.

THANKS

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

you have a serious talent for creating cute and endearing characters that can also be frightening when the need arises. Another super chapter. Thanks.

J.D.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Sexy goblins are great, but please, no orcs!. [And by all that you hold holy, ɴᴏ sᴇxʏ ʙᴀʟʀᴏɢs!]

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Strange little green girl but...

Her description wasn't attractive until Mike gave her a bath but the scene in the garage was boner inducing ,sex in the dark is always welcome.

My cock was swollen and leaking pre cum in my shorts by the end of that climax of Mike and tink getting down and dirty on the garage floor.

Then you managed to top that by giving us a threesome with Mike,naia and tink.

The lewd description of Mike sinking his hard cock slowly into the submissive little goblins anus while she was grunting in discomfort almost made me involuntarily make a blow a thick load in my shorts.

Loved it when he ejaculated nice and hard while balls deep in little tinks rectum while grunting and growling his pleasure, the goblin helplessly squirting out pussy juices in response was just icing on the cake.i love nasty fun like this.

I'm definitely gonna Jack off until I spew a big cum load while reading this chapter next time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Tink is so fucking hot!

Such a petite but horny goblin girl with an insatiable craving for big cocked home owners like Mike is a great edition to the story. I have a feeling Mike won't be able to get much done to fix the house when she's around though, you can't really blame the guy since Tink is such a naughty cock tease!

Also, the erotic and nasty anal scene in Naia's bathtub had me putting my hand up my skirt in class!

Lol, I hope no one noticed!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A tiny goblin girl with a bouncy ass and big boobies? Umm...........YES PLEASE!

I was so worried that this series would not have enough anal scenes to satisfy my tastes, but you put those worries to rest with the introduction of this horny green troublemaker. Thank you for writing the erotic anal scene with her in the tub, it got me hooked. I have a feeling Tink's sexual preferences will no doubt have Mike craving to approach sexual encounters in the future with more ease and confidence. Just remember to have Mike feed her tight hungry anus as much of his thick warm creamy cum as possible in the future chapters. I just love the fact that Tink's lewd butthole has a ravenous appetite for long juicy thick cocks like the one Mike has.

ScottAvenueScottAvenuealmost 3 years ago

I am absolutely in love with your story thus far. You are truly a phenomenal writer that is highly gifted at painting mental images. Please keep up the amazing work! Xoxo

iseeyoufly1964iseeyoufly1964over 2 years ago

I love this story line, very much! Thank you for writing them, you are a fantastic writer...5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Is this the very first time that Mike shoved his lovely big cock inside a female's bumhole? Holy fuck! No wonder the poor guy growled like a beast in mating when his meaty cock hardened past the point of no return and jerked up super hard to let out a gallon of the creamy stuff deep up inside Tink's silky soft cock starved rectum. His swollen cock was experiencing a pleasure it had never gotten to experience before. Having anal sex for the very first time was what caused him to blow his cream wads so hard right up Tink's goo hole. His cock and balls were so aroused before he came, no wonder he shot so many thick steaming hot gooey ropes inside the goblin girl tight asshole.

It's even more impressive since Mike was able to hold off his orgasm and make Tink cum like a true anal slut on his fat cock and keep on stuffing her ass until she was forced to squirt her no doubt delicious milky pussy juice right into the water. Making a horny goblin cum is fairly easy but making them squirt like Tink did in the bathtub is no easy feat. I'm in shock that Mike managed to make her squirt like a fountain of youth so effortlessly. His magic enhanced cock is truly a sight to behold when considering how well, endowed his is. Mike is definitely blessed with a large weapon between his legs that will no doubt help him tame and subdue more monster girls in the future. Be it friend or foe, he will make them cum.

Hottest anal scene so far in the series, hope there's more of em. I just started reading this long series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I just started reading this series because of a friend recommending it. And I must say that I am quite shocked and intrigued by the unbelievably hot and raunchy sex scenes in the story so far. How this author cranks the sex between characters from one to eleven gives me quite a rush. It started out with simple water nymph x human sex scene that was very vanilla but satisfying.

But now.....we're suddenly greeted to Mike waking up one day to take care of some chores and through a series of very sexual and emotional events end up naked as the day he was born in a bathtub with his big rock hard monster girl loving cock buried firmly to the root inside the tight and lewd constricting anus of an anal sex loving goblin girl that has no issue with getting her holes used as roughly as possible.

I am absolutely loving the way Annabelle describes the sexy naked bodies and the emotional attachment between characters in graphic detail as they use each other to satisfy their lust and end up falling in love.

The description of Mike mercilessly stretching out Tink's cock starved cum hungry anal cavity making her inhumanly tight little pussy squirt her milky essence from the force of her orgasm with his hips desperately grinding into her soft fat goblin booty as his own orgasm overtook and made his large cock blast mighty torrents of his fresh cock cream from the tip of his fat purple cock head deep inside the depths of Tink's gooey slimy goblin guts as she continued to shake and quiver in release was simply the peak of this chapter.

I was not expecting an author with a name as tame and motherly as Annabelle to write down such a devilishly naughty deep anal creampie sex scene.

You definitely have my attention now Miss Annabelle, I will read this entire series to the very end and enjoy your wonderful sexy story.

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