All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 100'

100 Chapters and still going STRONG!!!

Love it all, I'm so happy your writing here. I have been and continue to be a faithful follower for years now. Looking forward to this new adventure and of course the fishy dad jokes. Thanks for Sharing!

First off thank you for writing my home into your story, and as always please write longer chapters, I would love to spend the better part of my day reading your writings. They are beautiful examples of the art of creative writing

First…? Lol

Let me take this opportunity to say just how much I’ve enjoyed reading this series. I believe I started reading when you were deep in book 6. You are a very talented writer, and I hope that you keep writing more chapters! I wait for the next chapter with bated breath! 😊

Damn it feels as if this is your best, I was completely mesmerized by your story, I am so addicted to your writing. Five stars for this one. Geez!!!

Hi Annabelle and everyone!

Congrats on reaching the symbolic number of 100 episode of this wonderful tale, I hope to read a lot more of Mike and the gang's adventures, perhaps a 100 more episodes!

Best regards

It’s not that you have posted 100 chapters that is most impressive to me, it’s that the story has continuously improved and grown over the course of 100 chapters. Thank you so much for your efforts and for sharing your stories here.

Congratulations on your 100th chapter. Please make sure someone takes Death back an Hawaiin shirt at the end of this particular adventure!

And the big question is; "Does Beth have mermaid/merman sex?"

Congrats on number 100. Love your writing. Thank you for sharing.

Congrats on number 100. Love your writing. Thank you for sharing.

What a lovely bunch of coconuts we have going here.

Was a really quick read though.

Gonna read the adept series by piers Anthony.

Be well and guess I have to wait till the next chapter

Congrats on reaching the 100th episode of this wonderful tale. I love you're tales of Mike and his extended family. I hope to continue reading them for as long as you continue writing them. Being a dad I hope to see lots more dad jokes whether they be fishy or not.

Great job 100 chapters. I give it 10 stars. All your stories are great I always look for the next one with anticipation.

Would Beth still get fucked by all those monsters after being with Mike? How does Mike feel about that? They're not in a relationship, but... uhh... I don't know.

Oh what do you know it was nice to avoid it for the Christmas book her here we go again Beth back at it again being stupid and throwing a wrench into everything cuz she wants to fuck a merman now. She beyond the worst character in this story.

Congrats on reaching 100 chapters! Thoroughly intrigued as where this current tail will flow

Getting a captain Nemo vibe from the captain.

Love a good pirate introduction!!! So many threads suddenly bursting from the w(e)ave!!!

A delight as always, many thanks!

Yes yes yes

So that is 500 stars...

Congrats mam on reaching 100th story.

Once again another trademark story by your hands. The situation of Beth reminds me of the situatiin Beth faced in fey realm.

Looking forward for

Captain vs Caretaker vs Order or Captain and Caretaker vs Order.

How did Captain enter the domain of Caretaker ?

Way to go!

Cannot wait to see how this unfolds.

It's kinda crazy when you look at the Non-human hall of Fame and every single one of the top stories are written by Annabelle! Rock on!

Fun fact about the Spaniards. There were less than 200 conquistadors and over a million natives (Mayans, Incan, etc)

Apocalypto (2006) was a very real reality for many of the common folk. When they learned about the Gospels, thousands upon thousands joined the Spaniards in overthrowing the ruling caste.

They then did what Mike does a lot of. Sex. Until the two ethnicities blended into today. That’s what they teach in Mexico.

It’s a similar story with Columbus. Caribbean comes from the ruling (cannibals and slavers) tribes: The Caribs.

Haibo!!! And the plot thickens.... I love it. I hate it, so many complications. Super excited but anxious. Beth and her humanness!! Fae court repeat

Uh oh, another game player has entered the board.

And congratulations on 100 chapters for this story so far.

Congrats on 100 chapters.

If this chapter is anything to go by, this is going to be amazing,

Why is the rum gone?

Those mermaids are dicks. They demand to send the princess with them, and then demand a hostage to guarantee the safety of the person they insisted on sending. All when Mike and friends are doing them a favor.

Hope the captain dies he reminds me emily and we all know how EVIL she turned out.

Oh Annabelle Hawthorne,

Your twists in this tale are exquisite and I want you to know how much of a torture it is to wait for the satisfying conclusion to this wondrous tapestry you are weaving.

SR

Goodness 100 chapters and no signs of slowing down! Just when we reach one climax it's right up that hill to the next one.

Hope this new player becomes friendly. The last few were less to be desired.

what a bomb! can't wait for the next part

Awesome job with a hundred chapters! (Not to mention the spin-offs). Thanks once more for your beautiful tail .. ehm tale! ;p

I am curious if dad jokes are a symptom of some kind of developing dad magic. :D

For some reason this chapter showed up after chapter 10 on the entire chapter list. Not sure if anyone else had that problem. Just a heads up.

my gush 'hurry up'loved it as always,I guess your story is loved by Arthurs 'just as long they keep to your receipt.

First: Congrats on the big 100! 🎉

Second: daaaaamn! A confirmed new Player awesome. Can't wait to see where this story goes next!

Oh, and third: Lily dealing with the "room service" had me trying not to crack up too much at work. 😆

Congrats on chapter 100! I look forward to every release and it keeps going strong!

In case it wasn't mentioned, the Literotica ordering by title put this after Chapter 10. I don't know if the site catered for a long series, maybe they can adjust without having to redo 99 titles?

The way u twist your stories is awesome. Can't wait for another chapter to see new players in play hope they're friendly

Amazing story Miss Annabelle, thank you! Like some others, I'm not into Beth's character here, but I have no doubt she'll be impaled by a mer-shaft at the first opportunity. I'm much more interested in Mike putting a baby in Leilani!!! Hopefully there are a few mer-hotties who can become regular characters and live in the mansion greenhouses lakes, rather than become one-off characters that enjoy some sex with Mike but really don't become part of the family. Titania, Holly and the Plant woman come to mind. Many congratulations on the 100th, and I'm looking forward to 100 more!!! Woo hoo!

I almost missed this because for some reason the website messed up the order. So now Mike's being doublecrossed on two sides, and another Player is revealed. The mermaids probably want the Captain to claim Paradise and they're all probably willing to kill him to get it. Honestly if he knew the land would be in good hands I could see Mike being willing to hand it over, but I don't know if the rules would allow it or if the Captain would trust him. It'll be tough for Mike to fuck his way out of this one. Looking forward to the next chapter.

The captain must DIE.

Hi again Annabelle and everyone!

I kinda knew that Lapérouse existed for real, so I went to check who he was and he's a pretty cool French sailor and explorer! Dude was, at the end of the XVIIth century, defending the locals of the islands he visited in his writings and taking actual care of his ships' crews. That's quite nice for the time.

Plus he disappeared under circumstances that were mysterious for decades and his body was never found.

I hope François Lapérouse is Jean-François de Lapérouse, kept alive through the centuries by the magic of his Side.

If it's him, he may be the Captain, but his Side probably has a "discover and study" motto relative to cryptids: he disappeared leading a scientific expedition set to mimic and expand on Cook's.

So, yeah, cool guy!

Best regards,

Cortavar

PS: Rumor has it that some of Louis the XVI last words on the day of his beheading were "Do we have news of Mr de Lapérouse ?"

On this fateful day, I to, shall suffer the agonizing wait for the next chapter, as I have now caught up to the story. Woe is me!

Amazing as always :)

Love the way you manage to keep on getting more complexity and issues for Mike & family to have to contend with...

Many thanks.

Well I've read all 100 installments of this story and I'm looking forward to seeing more of this. Thank you again for letting us read this. Yours truly MrRLF, Thank you again.

Annabelle,

Please help. A month is too long.

Congratulations,

echoCTRL

P.S. Time to put a zero at the start of all 99 other chapters.

Whoop whoop 100! I started when there was 30 chapters expecting it's a finished series. I didn't want to be on a cliff hanger waiting for the next chapter yet here I am. Best story and characters on this site. Beth will make Mike proud! Isn't she blonde? When the story is complete, I want to buy every book.

Beth is a brunette and not a good romantic partner for Mike, imo. Not every woman in a harem story needs to be a romantic interest for the main character, maybe it is better that she and Mike remain just friends.

Hi

The sort on your page needs to address 3 digits

100 is now under 10 in sequence.

Lit staff have adjusted the chapter titles for 3 digits. Huzzah to our hosts, Laura and Manu!

A certain French explorer may be part of the Game, but Mike has made a LOT of allies; the ones with him are just the tip of the iceberg as it were (no offense, Yuki!).

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

I am having trouble keeping track of all the characters and their various unique characteristics. I might try making my own program of characters just to keep them all straight.

Awsome writing. Some of the best erotic writing I have ever read.

Nice touch with the lesbians.

Thank you.

Ordinary_Paradox

Mike needs to grow a backbone and stop relying on Beth so much. He's suppose to be the caretaker. I get you need help but damn atleast try to figure out something on your own for once.

I really enjoy this story. Please , unless something really tragic happens in RL, Finish it.

I have read a couple of stories on Lit , and I am so disappointed when a brilliant story, like this one , just ends without ever finishing :( , So please be save , eat healthy and don't forget about us :D

Not fond of beth on this

I'm struggling to figure out why this chapter feels so different from the others.

I love this series, I know it's erotica, but at times it feels more like a normal series on mythological and paranormal creatures which I like a lot. I wonder what Frankie's deal is though and what happens this time with Mike being away..

You keep your scores...and somehow manage to up them.

Each chapter is far too short . I even managed to delay two weeks the reading to make shorter the wait after.

Keep taking care of of our family. They always outlast the tale. See you soon.

Wow, 100 chapters, just wonderfull, this is a epic story.

Interesting chapter. Feels like the setup for this story is a bit more sinister. Or cloak and dagger somehow. Let's see. We've got the Order's Team Sticky Fingers at the House trying to steal it, We've got the Order's Team Beach Bums being annoying and feeling all high and mighty political schemy, Director Amir (because who else?) ripping the Order apart from the inside and finaly Captain Frogbutt and the 40 Mermaids rattling sabres and trying to screw over Mike and Clan Radley. So that's 4 arcs you're weaving into the story for book 7. It's going to be a wild ride. And I don't mean those mile high vertical water slides at the waterpark...

I have just binged all 100 chapter in, what, 3 Sat's, and cannot WAIT for the next installment!

your story ,home for horny monsters,is so good I believe it started a few spin off from your story are you genius for writing that's pretty dam good I was a wheel of time that was before I read yours so I prey please don't stop writing

Ooooh Jack Sparrow meets the game, let's go! I'm excited to meet more players!

wonder if Francois would be Francis Drake and the ship is the Flying Dutchman? would be cool to see.

Annabel, congrats on chapter 100!

Not including any side gigs.

Three bands scheming is a new feature let's see how it develops.

Lilly is to much😏

Dun dun dun.. Captain...

I hope you received a 100th episode cake to share with the cast and crew like they do for television shows. If not, we still appreciate your writing even if your producer doesn't. Speaking of, any word on when the movie or series rights will get picked up?

Paul

I really love my dramatic Lily😍😍.

Who is this Director?

And Frankie?

I just love the tension of every chapter.

A sleeping god, a fire dragon (presumably the Guardian), royal politics, and a three hundred year old explorer.

This'll be interesting.

I made it to a hundred chapters. 🎉

Ravus_Sapiens, I think "interesting" is going to be an understatement. I am smelling a trap of gigantic proportions. This gang from the order are as rotten as they come.. There are a couple of lowlifes missing from the collapse of that historical society debacle and I'm thinking one of them I this Director person...

The Caretaker, the Captain, the Director.

Where's the Doctor when you need him ?

“Mike & the Harem Go to Hawaii” is the “Saved By The Bell Goes to Hawaii” for the new millennium.

Loved the portal reference. Love your work.

Well done excellent story keep it coming