All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 105'

I am loving this story so much. Your ideas are incredible. I would like to put the level of imagination into my stories. Thank you for spending your time to give people a taste of another world.

A very old and powerful Kupua. Mike is in really deep shit, especially since she appears to know all about him.

Thank you for this amazing story. keep on sharing with the rest of us as long as you can.

I don't know how you come up with this but you know how to make the reader want more. Can't wait for the next Chapter.

It's not a mountain; it's a dragon that has been sleeping so long that plants have grown on top.

It's not volcanic fumes; it's the dragon's breath.

Great story, thanks.

Wow that was awesome, but short , can you please try two chapters per months

You are good with this 🥰🥰, please write more and make it fast and and more than 4 pages every chapter

One of very few authors that i can't wait to read. Spellbinding story!

Loving all the myths and legendary animals. That you keep writing about… the only problem i can see is when i get into the story. You keep ending it for month!!! 😂… looking forward to the next chapter…

Hi Annabelle and everyone!

I loved this chapter, as always, and I'm very interested in getting to know more Pacific Islander mythology through your tales! Also, dragons! Squeeeeeeee!

You already have Quetzalli, sure, but she's a hot milf dragon, not a gigantic reptile of ages past, lording over a desolate mountain. Well, not since she was banished at least...

You're still the best,

Cortavar

Wow. Such fun. Great read as always. Thank you.

I am always so glad to see the next chapter! Thank you for this!

At least this didn't end in a cliffhanger... no cliffs anywhere

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! you end here! sadist!

Guess what, another cliff of a hanger :)

The story is AMAZING, but the cliffhangers are driving me insane......

Thank you for the hard work of telling Mike's story!

I’m very proud of myself for guessing the Director’s identity quite a while back. Incredible writing, as always.

Thanks!

More... write faster *cracks the whip*

Great story. get'n all them stars

Nice shout out to the guy who cannot finish his tale.

Love your story. Thanks for sharing your world.

I always look forward to the next installment. I’m really enjoying your descriptions of the island and the creatures & people there.

The tags you add to your chapters are great! You might be the first person to post a story with the fluid dynamics tag in literotica history!

What is there to say? Again well written. Consistent, correct (grammar wise) and fluent (as in not like "Hulk fuck. Hulk big cock").

Really enjoyed this chapter, lots going on. I’m not sure how you are going to tie it all together but I’m looking forward to finding out. Your new chapters are one of the highlights of my month.

Another fabulous chapter! I can't wait for next month, and maybe seeing what's in store for the SOS.

Great chapter

Your story telling is so good that I don't miss the sex scenes.

Your build up is killing me with expectation Ms Hawthorne

SXR

Thank you for continuing home for morning monsters. I know you have a lot of material going on but I really wish you would write more than four pages you used to even though you are still keeping my interest it's frustrating not getting to the bottom of things you do leave a lot of cliffhangers but thank you again your stories are great.

Again a wonderful experience in this story. We will be impatiently waiting for the next installment! Thank you!

Thank you for sharing your art with us.

Always enjoy my time with you..5/5

Did they just meet a Hawaiian Mo’o?

A needed slow chapter full of impressive detail filling background and suspense ending in the three parallel stories. A magistral one too.

As always thank you for your magnificent work.

Thankyou for another great chapter!

Absolutely I did love it you put this together so great.

Can’t wait for the next one please hurry and make them longer lol keep up the great work my friend god bless

This is getting better and better!!

Awwww, yet ANOTHER chapter no sex?? Aww.....well I miss the sex scenes.

But amazing story, Miss Annabelle, I think this Hawaii book is my favourite in a long time! It has a great adventure tale feel to it, rather than past ones that focused on big battles. We can tell that you really do your research! Love the character development too. I know at this point it's impossible to have all the girls in a story, but I miss Cecilia, Abella, and Cerberus! Maybe this mysterious lady they meet at the end of this here chapter can become another cryptid lady who shares Mike's bed?

Thank you for your compelling stories and fantastic talent.

Fantastic series. Does anyone know if there's any other way to purchase Annabelle's other stories, aside from Amazon?

I shiver with anticipation!

This felt like it was going to only be a 'connecting' chapter, but it was a bit more, huh?

Instead of a cliff, you gave us a 'cave hanger'.

I've realized that I didn't realize sooner that as the books progress, they are like a videogame where you keep picking the 'best team' per adventure for the 'squad'. Everybody gets a name-drop along the way, but the main action has to be honed into a smaller group each book, and it takes great world building and plotting to make all of those characters align in a cohesive sense.

Well done!

Great story, when is the next part due out

Another saturday matinee!

Great as always, I am reading 15 more novel length books at the same time to fill in the gaps in publishing. It's maddening however I did turn my mother in law onto this series and was handsomely rewarded with a home cooked meal...Thanks!

I notice more and more description and depth to the characters that is organically presented through fluid dialogue and I love it!!!

Awesome stuff once again! I was so pleased to see this come out early, but then I realized it would likely be a longer wait until the next chapter...

Another great chapter and excited to read the next one. I’ve never been so invested in a book series before, you’re a great author Annabelle xx

Ms. Hawthorne,

IRL, I am a producer, but I am posting this anonymously so you know I won't benefit from anything I tell you.

I am so impressed at the world building in this series. You would do well to compile these stories into distinct books and sold them on Amazon. After they were published, you could license the series rights to a production company like Adam and Eve or executive produce it to Pornhub as a dramatic series using CGI. Since you can use CGI, you can then release 2 scenes. one with special effects and one that is just the actor in pre-green screen mode.

They would do it to increase their raw subscription numbers like GoT on HBO or Disney+. You've got something special here. It's more imaginative than True Blood and smarter than 50 Shades.

Just another great chapter. 5-stars.

The Director guy is soooooooo mad that Mike has been doing things Ratu didn't allow him do to her😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Gonna need some Opal and Mike sex scenes.... at some point.

Ahh cliff hanger ur killing me!! Cant wait for next chapter.

This new lady at the end is possibly the personification of this property, like Hestia for the main property.

Great! Keep writing! I love this series!

I started reading this series after a surgery in August. I was so disappointed when I noticed I caught up to your writing. Iv loved this story, some times iv had trouble putting it down.. I have a couple questions are you going to publishable books I saw there was a few for sale. My other question is to much of a question but , please keep this story going fuck the haters lily would. My favorite characters are lily death and que

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awsome

And I will be patiently waiting again for the next installment of HFHM!!! Well done ☺️

Awesome. This is my third read through. I love reading the comments and web searched quite a few of the various Hawiian legendary creatures based on them.

I just wonder if Ingrid will get to taste the source of the 'nutty' flavor in the granola bars and realize what she has been eating. Would make for a funny scene! :D

Keep up the wonderful work!

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Very enjoyable. Thanks!

Ohhh come on. So close...

This is the problem with binging stories. I devour them voraciously and then catch up and I'm in agony waiting for the next chapter to come out. I love your work Annabelle

Crackfiend76

Brilliant story, very entertaining looking forward to the next episode with much enthusiasm and anticipation the sooner the better, keep it coming

I enjoy this series, even stopping looking up a word here and there. Keep up the good writing!

It’s taken me awhile, but I’m at the end of your last chapter!!! I am bereft and verklempt! Any more HFHM coming soon? I feel like I’ve lost an arm or something.

Again, a splendid chapter, great work! Thank you!!!

Just a hint, wouldn't it be nice to keep the "chronological reading order for the full story", which you gave us in the beginning of this chapter, on your author's page?

There you can keep it up to date, just like your publishing plans.

Keep rockin' \m/

Wonderful!

Always keeping me on the edge of my seat, awsome.

With love ❤️.

But each installment seems to be shorter!

Probably just me wanting MOORE!

Incredible. As usual. All the "Peril of Pauline" at once. Mike is at the door of a new adventure. Ratu and company are tied up on the tracks and the Train Is Rounding the bend! Beth is in the midst of danger, dangers, we can't even guess at yet. The house is under siege by criminals. My heart can't take much more excitement! But, I can't wait for the next chapter. Totally captivated by you writing skill! Love it Annabelle! You are best on here by far!

The chapters end too quickly! Now that I have caught up to the publishing schedule, I will have to wait for the next posting to get my HFHM fix. 🙁

The story is excellent, as always.

I'm addicted to your writing. I'm 53 and have read books by some of the most amazing authors. I gasped out loud when I saw a new chapter of this story was out. Even without any sex, these characters are fleshed out. The writing is so authentic...I've laughed I've cried and I've raged. You are an amazing author. Please, don't stop, and give us more of this enthralling world you've crafted.

And once again I am caught up to the present! Glad to finally be on this ride with you in real time!

-AT

Excellent story, more please

Amazing story and so well written!! I found this story a few weeks ago and honestly, it’s all I’ve been reading. Now I’m like the rest…impatiently waiting for the next chapter! We need 100 more!!

All I could imagine was the scene of Smaug being introduced. Brilliantly done

Pele-honua-mea?

oooh another cliff with a hanger on

I love the tags on these stories. “Breakfast with a douchebag” is so on the nose, it’s Kleenex.

Yuk yuk yuk, sure thing. Yeah I got a lot done today! Sat here reading chapter after chapter! Good job. Thanks. Be happy and safe!!!😘😘😘

Love letting a few chapters pile up then diving back in (don’t want to settle for reading just one at a time). Once I reorient myself, each installment is, as the merfolk might say, a breath of fresh water!

This is the chapter I have looking out for since chapter 100, the one in which the big plot points are set up and now chaos can unfold.

I'm insanely curious who that old woman is, I suspedt she's the "cartaker" of Mike's property and she won't make it easy for him to claim it. And that big creature Ingrid,Ratu and Quezalli just found will spice things up even more.

Only shame is that the house wasn't really present this time, I hope to see some non-Jenny ways of the home to protect itself in the near future.

Btw, I love the world-building in this one. A gigantic dragon, probably miles long resting under the US is just cool and implies that there is still so much of the Order we don't know.

Five stars.

"If not for some basic biology and magic, he would have knocked every single one of us up numerous times."

I want to read the version of the story where this happened.

Such an amazing story so hard to put it down and stop reading keep up the amazing work

Ummm... Hephaestus was obviously wrong, should have gone Hawaiian... Pele maybe? Let's find out...

ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! (runs)

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