by writerannabelle
From the very first post, I'm always looking forward to the next one
Whoa what a mind screw that was ha ha ha. Whenever you do that mind trick I laugh over Mike's reaction from how I picture it. Now we know more of the history of Emily so that was a great pice of work. I do have a question about what happened to these other properties?
I'm enjoying this a little style is smooth and unobtrusive and the episodes quite different and varied. Thanks.
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I fear I would get lost in it, you take such turns to write these stories. It allmost makes me dizzy, yet it all comes together so nicely.
JohnCK
Great side story, or is it just a side story. Bigfoot may still be at the remote location and holding critical information about what happened with Daisy and Emyle. You weave a great tale ... not so patiently waiting for the next great installment.
You continue to impress me. And leave many threads begging to be followed.
Thanks for sharing! 5* Slainté mo chara
I thought I posted a comment, and it could be the website acting up. If this is duplicated, just delete the extra comment.
In any event, I remain impressed with your ability to tell a good story and write interesting characters. I liked the scene you finally worked out.
Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté mo chara
Another great instalment. Looking forward to the next chapter. Great writing, please keep it up
Love it..... Each chapter gets deeper and deeper in some enchanting way... Bigfoot??? Really??? Now I want to go talk to the tree outside my little house. LOL... I have always like the woods and feel soothed and calm when I'm there.. ( But it's hard to move around in a wheelchair ).. Anyways PLEASE keep up the FANTASTIC tale/story...
N.D
Wow. Did not see bigfoot coming, that was amazing! And the tease of an arachne! Oh your so cruel to make me wanna move to Utah of all places lol. Thank you again for sharing your wonderfully sexy imagination with us, eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Hopefully mike will meet a female Bigfoot in the future. I'm excited to see what other creatures Mike will meet next.
Just wow. A completely differant style of writting and story arch. I'm very impressed. That was just amazing. Insightful. Full of intrigue and questions. Maybe it's because you were writting from a female perspective. Really descriptive and setting up twists and turns.
Bravo
Wow, lots of hints at whats to come, I probably missed half of them. It was nice to see a happy memory from Emily, she has sort of come across as eccentric lately so its good to see here being nice. Now I'm really looking forward to the Arachne, and Daisy looks like she will be a friendly and helpful member of the family.
That's so true about Harry and the Henderson's, I did something similar the first time I saw the movie, after that I watched the show and decided he would protect me so it was ok for him to be there.
Thanks again for the great writing!
You are laying the ground work for much more than I can guess at this point; you are both creative and uniquely imaginative, I so love the way your devious mind guides your stories. More please, and keep revealing the layers of Mike's Home for adorable Horny Monsters. I do hope that Elizabeth, Amir, Sebastien and many of these other dwellers in the darkness that trouble Mike, and these innocent ladies of Radley manor, will soon get what's coming to them. TTFN
I absolutely love the way your mind works! I also love the detail you provide and use to connect things all the while keeping the suspense up for how it will be connected and when. And just when you start to get comfortable - wham! In comes a left hook you didn't see coming. I eagerly await your next installment. I almost feel like a kid again waiting on Saturday morning to see what happens to our heroes. Lol. Till then...
Just had to say how much I love your stories and wait eagerly for the next Chapter. Keep up the great work. I've always find words more erotic than pictures or film and you bring a special something to this epic. Phil
I really love your work! I find myself rather intrigued by Amir, and what type of villain you plan on making him. All those years in pursuit of power must have taken some kind of toll. Anyway, great job, as usual!
Hm, why did this one not appear in my activity feed despite having you favorited?
I guess I was lucky I caught it anyway. I was a beautiful piece and seems to lead up to something very interesting. I am looking forward to the next.
This story has captured me in a way no other ever has. I find myself checking often to see if you've added another chapter. The development of the characters, the near cinematic mental imagery...top notch!! I eagerly look forward to the next installment!!
ps I also have favorited you, but this chapter did not show up in my feed, similar to a reader above. I located it only because, as I said before, I am always looking, hoping for another glimpse into your world. Thx again!
Could you possibly add in a ork character It would be interesting to see what Tink would do with him/her. It could be male or female but people might want it to be female more but Its not my decision and they might want a new male character to you know connect with him like having a beer and chilling out with the boys and stuff like that you know guy things also this character could be really into fighting or something like that. I also got this idea from lord of the rings so maybe its not the best and if read this hole thing then thank you and think about pls.
If Emily got her forest power from a male Bigfoot. How will Mike get his power? Is there a female Bigfoot?
I can't wait to the next chapter so hurry and write the next one.
Great job! This stories about Emily are excellent!
Thanks a lot!
Thanks a million enjoy the story please keep writing
Yourrrrrr great
As Tony the Tiger would say
I am reading this from the future. Cool to get a message through time.
I’m slowly catching up! I love your writing so much. I’ve been quiet on your patreon because I know if I read your posts I’ll spoil little surprises, twists and cliffhangers. I’m starting to understand how important those little breaks/cliffhangers are. I’ve always spent months working on one long chapter feeling like I had to get this plot idea written no matter how long it took. But shorter chapters (2-4 on Lit instead of 9-13) have a greater appeal to a reader and are quicker, easier to edit for the author. One day I’ll be a great author! (hopefully) I know I have areas I need a lot of work on, like bringing a character’s inner voice to life.
Can’t wait to catch up!
I love this I read another one about Aracna and now see they connected , I love it
Excellent tie in with your Arachna stories, the discovery in this chapter is interesting.very well written.
"The sundial was good for only thirty more hours, which was cutting it close." Mike can only set it for 24 hours. Possible future upgrade?
truly love your style and the beautiful immersion of Emily's awareness with the wondrous power and sentience of Nature and the Forest. Reminding us all very sweetly of what we need to pay reverence and respect to, especially in these most trying of times.
And loving the connection to "last of her kind." I stopped reading HFHM few months back, at end of first part, not realizing you intended to keep going, and at such an amazing pace. stumbled onto "last", and didn't realize Aunt Emily was from HFHM until got to this chapter. Just checked and see you wrote this chapter months befor "Last." amazing to think you could have hatched that story and kept it waiting while continuing to bring new energy to HFHM. Much love and appreciation for
This was an interesting fork in the path of this journey. I cannot help but think the significance of this vision will emerge more than once in future chapters. Well done! Finn
You are such a fantastic writer, i have been binge reading this series. It is 2 am i have work in 4 hours its hard to stop reading. Thank you for such a great series
Oooohhh, Silver Bridge & Pine Barrens, I absolutely love the early setup so much more on the second read.
$#@% Leeds...
Your imagination knows no bounds. Now it's Big foot and Emily plus a witch? and Mike with Daisy as a link, I think. I remember the cabin and it's isolation bubble and the members of the Order from the arachnid story.
Another 5⛤
I love your introduction to bigfoot...i hope theres a female bigfoot in the future...
Guess big foot means foot long bigfoot eh? Lol love it. Also a huge fan of your idea and explanatiin of his forrest walking. As always dont ever stop writing and dont ever change Annabelle F Hawthorn😁😊
I was wondering what happened to Daisy. It appears Emily was making BFFs wherever she went in her later life! She sure is making it harder for Magic Mike to do his work! Great chapter.
The forest portals transport system and biffoot perception are things I love
Your imagination appears to know no bounds, the use of forest portals hiding within specific trees is great as is the idea of 'Bigfoot' dopping himself with herbs, which is why he is so rarely seen.
The story is going off into areas that are dream worthy. I haven't looked into the number of chapters or the timeline of the postings. I just want to read this forever.
The story is going off into areas that are dream worthy. I haven't looked into the number of chapters or the timeline of the postings. I just want to read this forever.
🤔I really should have notebook because by the time I reach the end of the chapter I've forgotten the one twist and turn with the other to comment 👍
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I'm liking the story. Emily's adventures sound interesting. Big foot's magic is a pretty good idea.
Chevy Impala? A nod to Supernatural, there.
Also, a wardrobe that goes to other places...