All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 036'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Another one bites the dust.

I was really looking forward to this one, and the wait was definitely worth it. Can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
awesome

Yet another amazing installment from you. Its always nice to see mike interact with monsters like ratu who may be over shadowed by the more popular ones. Like cecilia and naia for me. I am curious about something though. You have mentioned vampires and werewolves in previous chapters. Will we meet any in the future or have you avoided them due to the fact that they are so widely written about? Also i was curious as to if lily will make a return. I now youve mentioned doing her own story with dana but i was really enjoying seeing her and mikes relationship evolve. Thanks for this story and keeping me hooked.

Patrick

TheSecretBunnyTheSecretBunnyabout 5 years ago
Ugh what a mess

This will take Mike ages to fix, once he gets back. It will be far worse if the time runs out and the baddies get in to the house..

ender2k2kender2k2kabout 5 years ago
Very nice

I really like how you think. You seem to find a way out of these dilemmas with minimal violence. It would have been easier to just have them open a can of woop-ass to escape and you found a better way. Thanks

TJSkywindTJSkywindabout 5 years ago
I like it

A sex bomb. You have some imagination. Heh heh.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

JOVA82JOVA82about 5 years ago
Dropping the sexbomb

accidentally while just about everyone is in the same room, or gathered around Naia's fountain... Now that would be crazy episode.

Or in front of Mikes "worst" single enemy yet. That would get very interesting.

Anyhow, I really didnt expect that. And I have to say I love how that turned out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Atta girl!

Zel created a sex-grenade based on mantagora spores, what a wonderful weapon! A non-deadly device to allow our heroes to escape. Now how to get passed the jabberwocky,.. Ta

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Agh!!!!

I love this so much. The only problem that I’ve had is I want more. I want an endless supply of chapters that never ever end. Especially now with Yuki taking over the house. Poor Naia. Poor Annabelle.

WhatthehellmanWhatthehellmanabout 5 years ago
Excellent

Another Incredible chapter. The sex grenade was pure genius by the way. I'm also glad to see some solutions popping up instead of just problems and it was kind of getting annoying just having problems come up one after another with no clear solutions. Again this is a Fantastic story and you are a Fantastic writer. Keep up the great work!

baileytommybaileytommyabout 5 years ago
Monster girls

I loved it like all the rest of the chapters,can't wait till the next one SO hurry it up

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Love reading Mike's adventures

Hope we don't have much longer with him trapped away from home.

Keep up the great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great Chapter

Glad to see you back. Was missing the story.

SensualSigmaSensualSigmaabout 5 years ago
Well that's a coincidence...

I used to dance under the name 'Sex Grenade'.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Question about the flashbacks

Does the Garrett flashback take place before or after the Bigfoot and Yuki flashbacks?

Wondering if the Garrett attack is the reason Emily started or abandoned her search for immortality.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

not gonna lie, the sex grenade made me snicker because all I could think of was 'Sex Bomb'

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Don’t stop

Love your writing. The content, editing, the way the individual events tie together is simply awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Love it!

I havent left a comment yet so i feel i should now, i have been reading this every spare moment i have i absolutely love this story the sex is great but its the story its self that keeps me wanting more. I really enjoy how much you put into this amazing story an how detail there is in the character's personality and the wide rang of lore you use from all sorts of cultures. Please dont let this story die i will be anxiously awaiting to find out what happens next! JC.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Five Stars on the Whole Series

The story line would stand on its own even without the delightfully naughty content that embellishes the story in much the way that fine jewelry, the classic "painted on" little black dress, and artfully applied cosmetics enhance a woman's beauty without drawing attention away from her natural form and charm. Even better, in describing intimate scenes you describe the experiences of Mike and and his ladies so well that if you had not declared your gender it would be difficult, for me at least, to guess it from your prose. I find myself disappointed as each chapter floats bye and ends to soon. I hope your story continues to unfold like the house it describes and ends no time soon. However, if it becomes a chore, please start another delightful tale about women swinging theirs and men dutifully following as if on a leash. I remember such a time when I was so enchanted by the view of that swiveling anatomy on my first and much shorter girlfriend, much to the amusement of her mother, I walked straight into the partially closed garage door hitting the top of my forehead making it completely obvious what I was watching and it was clearly not where I was going. Keep up the good and amusing work. Ric

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Long time reader

Only good thoughts about your work. My difficulty at times is finding where I left off reading if I missed a chapter or more. I noticed that sometimes you leave a sentence or two summarizing the previous chapter - this isreally helpful. Your posts are remarkably error free. This chapter did have Mike spelled as Mlke a good number of times. Please keep it up. Excellent work!

Grimjack01Grimjack01over 4 years ago
Now he thinks

Mike really needs to get impulse control, he's in a battle of survival with the Society and others unknown yet. He really needs to be more cautious and plan out more. Some effective weapons and armour would be best.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great job

Please ignore the criticisms. You’re doing wonderfully.

kalaliciouskalaliciousabout 3 years ago

My gosh! I can't tell you how much I'm loving this entire story, truly great reading and highly rewarding! I'd buy these books!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I am sorry that I haven't given 5 stars to every chapter in this story. I have been massively entertained and enthralled. Sometimes I have been so eager for the next chapter that I have moved on before remembering to give you the deserved accolades. Thank you for this story.

The_Sheppards_CorrectionThe_Sheppards_Correctionover 2 years ago

An exciting adrenaline fueled rush … coupled with sadness about Sophia, Naia, Beth and so much else. Will Mike Jake it back in time to reset the sundial? So much anxiety! Finn

LitficLitficover 2 years ago

Totally awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Love this story! Reading through it a 4th time now! I did want to clarify/question one thing though. I believe in a previous chapter Zel told Mike that her parents died in a troll raid and that they were aware of her condition but chose to hide it. Why would her father, since he survived, push for her to move forward with the marriage if he was aware of her condition and what it would lead to? One of the rare storyline inconsistencies, but I thought it was worth mentioning. This story continues to keep me hooked regardless! Thank you Annabelle!

I appreciate the dedication to story development even if it cuts some of the sex out! It is what has allowed over 80 chapters thus far! The sex brought me here but I definitely stayed for the story.

jacosg36jacosg36about 2 years ago

"It looks just like the sex grenade." Gawd you made me look like a madman, sitting here cackling to myself over this line. Perfect!

Dima_SynDima_Synalmost 2 years ago

Oh, those poor, poor centaurs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So, Ratu was powerful enough to battle the other shapeshifter if not for her bootleg dragon, but even after "reenergizing" she couldn't protect Mike and Zel from centaurs that wanted to kill him/them after he had saved her life.

The tale is still entertaining, but that is one of several holes in the plot thus far that can be distracting at times.

Hearthfire223Hearthfire223over 1 year ago

Absolutely bonkers. And to think, the stress hitting the characters here is only comedy levels of nuts.

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69over 1 year ago

Having so much fun.

Ravey19Ravey19over 1 year ago

Absolutely bonkers in the nicest possible way. Think you must have read many fantasy stories to get the characters and a great story it is.

Tomcat1772Tomcat1772over 1 year ago

The way that you dealt with the centaurs with the pollen and fairy cum was genius!!! I can't wait to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Oohh Mandragora pollen strikes again. In the best way possible. Wonderful chapter !

Belzebub1978Belzebub1978over 1 year ago

I love your story. Its tense, exciting, and not all about sex. cant stop reading :)

KatLadyKatLadyover 1 year ago

The portion of this chapter with the centaurs was FUNNY! I can just imagine the expressions on their faces when Mike said he forfeited so nonchalantly. And the Mandragora/fairy dust? Brilliant!

Great chapter.

Darrell269Darrell269about 1 year ago

Ok as I'm reading this incredible story, I was just wondering how amazing it would be to see this story play out as mini series on Netflix. Lol

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBB11 months ago

Really enjoying this series, thank you

JodailyJodaily9 months ago

Now that was funny! Anal Centaurs really deserved that mandragora. Seriously LMAO. I was starting to wonder if you were going to make it through two full chapters without sex, but nope, you got it in there in spades! Made me think of naughty Tink and those prude Christmas elves. Everybody had fun, the next day be damned. Onward we go!😋😁

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

That was a good plan. I'm would like more detail on the sex though.

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