All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 079'

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CoyotecomCoyotecomover 2 years ago

Cockblocked by a fucking Christmas elf! 🤣

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yes the Christmas special is here.

TheSecretBunnyTheSecretBunnyover 2 years ago
Sooo

Mike and the gang are going to save Christmas huh?, and by the way.

The snowball war at the beginning of the chapter was great, it reminded me of the ones I had as a child..

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You outdo yourself time and again! I have been waiting for you since the past two days!! Thank you for obliging me once again!!

RalphTheRedNinjaRalphTheRedNinjaover 2 years ago

Is this a tie-in to the Tink christmas ebook? I confess I haven't actually read that one.

CortavarCortavarover 2 years ago

Ho ho ho Annabelle and everyone!

Great to see you and with another chapter! Some cool story hooks in there as well!

Who froze time? How does the elf know Tink? Is time frozen for everyone? Will Mike and Beth finally fuck?

Best regards,

Cortavar

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Gah! I am, once again, waiting impatiently to see what comes next! It really is a testament to your prowess as a writer that this is the only story/series that I've been so enthralled with in over a decade. I eagerly await the coming chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You DID NOT. JUST. FREEZE. BETH. MAKING. A. MOVE.. I expect enticing cliffhangers but this… this is sacred ground!

5/5 gonna re read it tomorrow night.

FbjsFbjsover 2 years ago

Hah, thanks monster-mom. Dangling Mike×Beth in front of us like that and then denying us... who's the real monster? :-P

Many story lines to explore still, it's like a bunch of unopened christmas presents <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I swear to everything that's unholy if Lily is pregnant. UNGH I CANT TAKE THIS JUICY STORY. AND WHY MUST YOU TEASE A MIKE AND BETH ENCOUNTER LIKE SO. NO FAIIIIIIIRRRRR

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

No offense to the story, but I think my favorite part of this chapter was in the closing comments. Specifically the comments about Christmas becoming hornier and not seeing this story on hallmark.

tejingtejingover 2 years ago

I'm smiling like crazy here. Love where the new book is going! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oh my gawd! I can't wait!!!!!

Keeper_of_SecretsKeeper_of_Secretsover 2 years ago

How rude of you to freeze Beth like that. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nothing better happen to our girl Lily

PsychopuppyPsychopuppyover 2 years ago

Your killing me you know that! I knows it's fun to keep us in suspense but Geeezz. Aaaaaaaahhhhhhh. You are an amazing writer I have read the whole story 3 times already. Keep up the good work and I think I speak for all who read your works we, we can't wait until the next post.

GoulGoulover 2 years ago

There aren't enough stars in this galaxy to rate your story. Thank you so much for sharing it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oh dear god. I can’t wait until the next one. You have a gift with how you end the story and leave us hanging and waiting impatiently for the next one. Keep up the good work. The only thing I would want you to change is bring them on quicker but I know life happens so keep up the good work

skippersdadskippersdadover 2 years ago

I give you ten stars ,so i guess it is Mrs. clause

enjoy_readingenjoy_readingover 2 years ago

What a way to start off the new book chapter with a snowball fight. Leading us into Mike and Beth, then throwing this surprise at us. Can't wait for the next chapter. Well done !!!

mharrisonmharrisonover 2 years ago

Great start - really looking forward to reading more of this :)

Have loved the way your HFHM stories develop so very much hoping this continues the great work....

Many many thanks for sharing your work with us all.

As others have said, we need more stars !!! 5 is nowhere near enough!!

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 2 years ago

Muhahahahaha!

--That was an awesome intro to book 6. So perfect.

--No worries on me thinking it's just an X-mas story. Like Mike said, if those and more other myths are real, hidden carefully behind various gaes's and magics, why not this one too. Or one close enough to sip of the season, as it were.

--Death is just... so cute. Mike better not forget to punish Tink for what she did to those kids though. There are pranks, and then there's needing discipline. ~Although, there seems to be a character introduction that might help make up for their previous visit. *raises eyebrow at author* "How convenient."

--Thank you so much for continuing this amazing tale. You and yours Be well.

amethystjade15amethystjade15over 2 years ago

You interrupted the Beth/Mike scene! HOW DARE YOU?!?!

Nah, j/k, good job. Still bummed though. :)

Wdwerker76Wdwerker76over 2 years ago

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year Annabelle ! It’s always a delight when you publish new chapters. Especially when Tink is involved.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Tink sending Death on a Christmas snipe hunt. I love it. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yesssss! Finally, this chapter recaptures the playful, sexy fun of the earlier books!! Loved the fun snowball fight. Loved the amazing and hot Lily doing some good in the world (and I hope nothing bad happens to her too!!) I wasn't really a fan of Beth before, but she seems a lot more likeable in this chapter (and I agree, very unfair to have stopped her and Mike before doing it!) Loved the sexy and hot scene with Naia in the tub (and very curious about what Yuki obviously wanted to say) Loved the many tender moments between all the characters living lives instead of always fighting battles. I hope Mike gets to give a sexy elf a hot Christmas present! Please, miss Christmas Annabelle, can you deliver a Naia for me under my tree, or in my tub??!! Maybe a Lily, Kisa and Abella too!! (OK, I'm getting greedy) 5 stars

redpoppiesredpoppiesover 2 years ago

You have definitely mastered the craft of the serial novel and I can't wait for the next chapter.

MCRidersClubMCRidersClubover 2 years ago

Another amazing adventure awaits! 5 out of 5 stars, and I must agree with all the others: no fair to tease a sex scene between Mike and Beth and then pull it back like that. Practically cruel. Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Is lily pregnant???? I, Crafting bet one( 1) poptart that lily is somehow in the process of creating an living thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Much better than the last, I think I'm finally at peace with the Peggy sue transformation that Beth underwent.

LoverbullLoverbullover 2 years ago

Uncomfortable Lily scene. Sorry.

Kellymeg1Kellymeg1over 2 years ago

Wonderful as always.

I was so looking forward to the sex scene between Mike and Beth, but I guess I'll just have to wait. 😉

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Spoilers from past chapters ahead...

Some speculating Lily is pregnant? Don't get me wrong, I'd be thrilled if that were so, but I seem to recall when Lily was made into a succubus, her uterus was either removed, or something else happened to cause her to never be able to have kids. However, with all the magic flying around, who knows what could potentially happen!?? Miss Annabelle knows!! Awesome story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The Lily scene is the weakest part of this otherwise great chapter. It's an unfortunate break, in a lighthearted Christmas chapter. If you've read D&H you've read a scene like that 10 times over. Nothing new happened. Lily didn't meet any challenge, didn't come to a realization or learn anything. Maybe something will come of it in upcoming chapters but it didn't advance the plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I totally expected the snowball fight at the beginning.

It's enough of a trope that it was obvious to me from the start.

Wasn't expecting the ending though, hah!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank you so much this tale has kept me going over the last two years.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's a cute Christmas tale

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lol Mike got cock blocked by Santa Clause

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I read the Tink North Pole visit, so it's a good tie-in. Will Santa fix Tink's head? Finally Mike and Beth get together, and it's interrupted! Shame on you. Keep on writing, I look forward to your stories.

christi11christi11over 2 years ago

That was really good! A happy and fun chapter. No nasties. No bad guys. Nobody DIED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing! :-)

joshmosejoshmoseover 2 years ago

Tease! Fun, actually, and I eagerly await what Christmas looks like in Mike's world.

bimsandy2003bimsandy2003over 2 years ago

The only two things I don’t like in all your stories is….. I have to wait for the next one for ages and that each instalment is only 4 or 6 pages…..thank you….it’s awesome….love you

totostorytotostoryover 2 years ago

@writerannabelle, finally Mike and Beth would be together, Honestly, I was considering on give up the story, not because it becoming bad, but because it should be harem story, not revers-harem, nor cuckolding, which happened sometimes from book 02, obviously I am talking about Beth (she has sex with any males but not Mike even cuckold Mike when she had sex with Nia), if Beth must have sex with the others (not including Mike) male, or female, please don`t describe that sex scenes (just mention it). Maybe some would find that the only male (Mike) has sex scenes in the story is boring, however I think the majority will enjoy that, as it is the normal thing in the harem, we picture ourselves as the MC not any other males.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Not every single scene has to advance the plot. For example, I'd like to see more fun sex scenes between Mike and the girls. Even if it doesn't specifically "advance the plot," they do 2 things: 1. Include more girls in sexy scenes we haven't seen frolic with Mike in a long time, e.g. Ratu, that otherwise get little screen time, and 2. Provide more personal and emotional binding time for them. Well, those kids of things "advance the plot" too. I think the uncomfortable scene with Lily in this chapter helps establish that she's really working for justice by eliminating the REAL monsters, unlike maybe in her past as a succubus. How's that for plot advancement?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great start. Glad to see we’re back to the whimsical, at least for the moment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

FUCK - I KNEW IT COULDN'T BE THAT EASY FOR MIKE AND BETH TO GET TOGETHER

I HATE YOU

I HATE YOU

I HATE YOU

WELCOME BACK AND TICKLED PINK TO START ANOTHER ADVENTURE

I VOTED 94658623458 STARS

CHEERS

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent story and series! I’ve read and re-read this and the spin-offs multiple times, but I had to comment on this one. Mike’s reluctance to visit the hot springs with everyone echoed with Yuki’s awkwardness in the bathroom she shared with Emily was brilliant! Keep up the wonderful work!

kennyjoekennyjoeover 2 years ago

Absolutely wonderful! I am so excited to see how this all unfolds!! Thank you for another exciting chapter! !

Gdigger12Gdigger12over 2 years ago

Awesome!!!! Anxiously waiting for the next chapter again! You are an amazing writer!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wish I could give you stars unending.Lady you absolutely ROCK

DominicNicoleDominicNicoleover 2 years ago

Oh, I am in new territory now. Having to wait for the stories to come week by week, one by one. This will suck. But your writing is worth it

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Annabelle! Loving the new installment. The tension finally peaking with Beth has been fantastic and I can't wait for the ridiculous adventure we're about to get.

I hope the weirdly negative comments I'm seeing don't get to you. Your work is wonderful and if they've read this many chapters and kept going who are they to criticize. You'd have to go pretty far off the deep end for me to even consider not reading though so maybe I'm just too far gone.

chairfanchairfanover 2 years ago

As always, your writing is amazing

LuckyMeOriginalStoriesLuckyMeOriginalStoriesover 2 years ago

@totostory

Can you show me the chapter where Mike got cuckold by Beth and Naia, I'd like to read it just to get a laugh. 🤣

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

"Oh my Santa"... same thing she will scream when she meets Mike's magic. 5-stars. Looking forward to the next chapter.... which we can all expect when?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

(Gasp) BETH IS GONNA FUCK SANTA CLAUS. (Claps with glee)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

All scenes in which Beth fucks are my absolute favorites. I don't want them yadda yadda'd over. Give us Beth in all her orgasmic glory, and I'm happy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lady, that was a cliff so high i swear i fell when i looked down.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'll add my voice to those who are NOT fans of the Beth point of view sex scenes. Mike is the POV character. There are a lot of monster gals who don't get much attention, and it would be great if Mike found himself more frequently checking in on them and ending up in a fun, sexy and tender romp...

BaldLionBaldLionover 2 years ago

Well Played Annabelle! Keep Doing what you do!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fucking awesome!

totostorytotostoryover 2 years ago

@LuckyMeOriginalStories , CH.25 the scene between Dana and Naia (the sex wasn`t described but the action was obvious), then CH.29 between Beth and Naia ( Naia again!!! she nd Beth really respect Mike!!), however the second one I don`t remember if Mike even knew that Naia slept with Beth. the both scenes looks somehow done for a reason, but in all cases it is an act of cuckolding, anyway I don`t know what is so funny of cuckolding but here you are.

iseeyoufly1964iseeyoufly1964over 2 years ago

Great chapter...snowball fight in the beginning with who knows what in the end. Can't wait until the next chapter comes. What a great mind you have!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You are simply amazing! Keep up the great work and story telling

PyroDragonPyroDragonover 2 years ago

I stopped reading a long while back (maybe around the end of book 2 or in the middle of book three?) for the simple fact that it was obvious it would be ages before Beth and Mike got together. I didn't really want to go through reading how Beth was having sex with others left and right while her and Mike didn't do anything for some reason or the other. The biggest reason for this is that 9 times out of 10 when an author does this, when the two characters finally get together/have sex it's a very underwhelming and dissatisfying thing. It happens once, it's short, and its vanilla af when 99% of the story they were going tits to wall with everyone else constantly with the most unique and hot sex one can think of.

I haven't caught up at all, I come in every once in a while and search the pages with the keyword Beth to see how things are going. It's quite something that I happened to do so with this chapter just released. It was the last page, so I wasn't expecting much to happen except the beginning of them having sex, but instead I was met with more postponing. Which is fine, but again this is a massive build up. From some of the comments here I can see it has been going on for a while even without having read the whole story up to this point.

So my point is, I seriously hope this story doesn't go the 9 times out of 10 way and creates this insane hype only for the final delivery to fall flat. One sex scene, missionary position, thank you and good bye.

I'm not invested in this (thanks to distancing myself from the work as to not risk being disappointed) but it would still suck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love the way this book started there is so much fun and much needed good feelings after all that happened with the Jersey Devil, definitely appreciate the update on the kids i was worried they would have been forgotten about but thats a foolish concern on my part your an amazing author an i cant tell you how much i look forward to each and every chapter you submit!

JC

rayironyrayironyover 2 years ago
Oh Annabelle..: is nothing sacred?

Giggle....I do hope not!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

OMG Annabelle, I love you and hate you (ok I could never really hate you...) so much at the same time... geeze would you PLEASE let Mike and Beth hook up already...? Talk about coitus-interruptus... :*(

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I’ve been following along ever since the first day when I read the first chapter. You have an amazing gift that allows you to paint pictures in a person’s mind with your words.

Death’s last line, just now, has made me laugh harder than I expected to laugh at anything on this website. I hope you never run out of stories to tell, and I’m looking forward to the continuation and completion of Part 6.

Ever A Fan

John C

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A Christmas story always a welcome interlude this time of year. It's also a time to remember of the past so we may see a few flashbacks of previous caretaker's most likely from NAIA but will see what happens. I personally looking forward to see where the story goes from this l, if the house gets new add on, if beth and Mike take it to the next level, and if we will see what going to happen at the North Pole.

Good luck.

Sincerely,

Long time reader

LuckyMeOriginalStoriesLuckyMeOriginalStoriesover 2 years ago

Thank you Totostory for the directions. It's not that I find it funny it's everyone else's reaction to not getting what they want from this story. And PyroDragon makes a hella of a good point. I only hope not to do the same in my own stories.

BriteStudioMKMBriteStudioMKMover 2 years ago

Loved it.

Happy Beth is finally making a move and I’m going to be honest, it ACTUALLY surprised me that you’re going with Santa being real. I expected JUST Krampus. Maybe him being buddy buddy unexpectedly

Looking forward to seeing what’s next and how Dana’s parents react to her new “lover”

notStanleynotStanleyover 2 years ago

* tone of Book 6 will be significantly lighter in tone *

After that "lighter" promise I was getting worried about Lilly. Then you try to swing it around with a crashing sled?!? Think we need to keep an eye on you :}

princecharmingslprincecharmingslover 2 years ago

Beth and Mikenlove story bound to happen, but i did not expect it early as this. Loving it anyway! Cant wait for the next chapter.

ChrisHeadyChrisHeadyover 2 years ago

I just discovered "Holiday Hijinks" in the last few weeks so this is incredible that your brought her back!! Honestly it's so nice to see the family enjoying each other and getting frisky without the threat of the world ending. Really thought Beth and Mike were finally going to become lovers without a possession LOL.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Annabelle you have officially reached television show supernatural levels of story introduction with comedy surprise and intrigue at top tier levels I have been reading your story for years now I'm literally hooked it something I am constantly updating and checking for number one top tier book in my opinion cannot wait for the next chapters and so interested in this story I will admit sometimes these types of books will do stories like this but I am 100% down to jump into the sleigh with you and fly with Rudolph the Red-Nosed reindeer to the end of this book keep it up man remember there's at least one fan out there that is completely down for this story and support you 100%. God bless and stay safe 😍🤗

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Okay?

WTF? I'm speechless!

DruggoDruggoover 2 years ago

Your so awesome.

This had me cracking up to the point of tears

Bravo you beautiful soul.

I truly enjoy this series.

You have grown so much over this series from the first chapter of book one to here.

Just bravo

SraulersSraulersabout 2 years ago

Mike deserves better than Beth… she’s been a total cock hound from the beginning and would continue to fuck anything, man or beast. Write someone worthy of him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The elf girl is too timid and shy. I would have had a much different reaction to seeing Tink not wearing any underwear. Lewd little green cock teasing slut never fails to give me a fat boner with her naughty, childish and perverted antics. I'm honestly suprised by how Mike manages to keep his big monster loving cock out of her holes for extended periods of time without losing his mind. The man has quite an abnormal ability to resist such temptations.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

FUCKING FINALLY!!! THE TYPE OF GIRL I HAVE BEEN CRAVING TO SEE SINCE THE START OF THIS SERIES!!!! PETITE SEXY ELF GIRLS!!!!!! 🎄🎀🍑💖💖💖💖💝💝💝💝.

Cannot wait to see how Mike seduces santas sexy little helper, gonna be fucking awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Anyone remember what Kisa's ethnic background was, from when she was a human i mean. Like was she an asian, white, latina or a black girl like the color of her fur. I know this is a weird question but i forgot and don't feel like going through all the chapters just to find out. Please tell me😅

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

“Both hands on his cheekbones while doing a little dance” 😂 God bless you for that image!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Sraulers11 days ago

Mike deserves better than Beth… she’s been a total cock hound from the beginning and would continue to fuck anything, man or beast. Write someone worthy of him.

THIS!

How many continuing readers still even care about Mike being with Beth?

This will be like Moonlighting (because I'm old), where by the time they sleep together, the show was going down the drain.

Don't let that happen, Annabelle!

Just skip them doing it entirely.

I don't hate Beth, but I don't like her being with Mike anymore. You've written her out of being a good option for him. They will never be exclusive or 'serious' anyway, so the romance of 'them' is really a non-starter.

They should agree to just stay friends. Give Beth the cabin, she can take the other boys with her, and enjoy the daylights out of Bigfoot's big pecker.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uabout 2 years ago

Noooooo..... Mike, Beth, almost..... damn.

Unlike Anon below I think if it ever happens Mike and Beth will compliment each other to be a force to be reckoned with!

Hmmm at the mention of hot springs I wonder if the rats can make a portal from the fountain to the hot springs, oh the possibilities, but then Naia is tied to the house.

Love your work, please Annabelle 'can I have more?'

Lenny20Lenny20about 2 years ago
Very curious for this story arc

After this introduction to their new adventure, I am really fascinated by what could lie ahead for Mike and the gang. It might be really good for this one to be a bit lighter in tone than the last.

I hope we will see something with Dana and Quetzalli with Dana's parents, would be a really cool perspective to have.

Also: Mike is finally a father! Hopefully his dad meeting Santa will give Zel's foal something to love about Mike.

Not quiet sure how I feel about Beth coming on to Mike. It had a strange vibe to it, but maybe that's just me. I really like them as individual characters and Beth's toughness (expecially how she delt with the angel last book), but them coming together kind of feels forced. I hope this was a one-moment-and-gone type situation and not something either really puts their focus on.

But a good chapter for a hopefully very merry next part of the saga.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please add a Content Warning to the beginning of this chapter. Most of your chapters dont go into such dearth with the heavy topics Lily engages with at the beginning of this story and I think it would be really helpful to readers, especially readers with trauma, to have a heads up when that content is ahead.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

ADD A CONTENT WARNING????

HOW FUCKING SENSITIVE ARE YOU?? LIKE WHAT THE FUCK!!!

SHE'S NOT GOING TO CENSOR HER STORIES FOR PUSSY ASS LITTLE BITCHES LIKE YOU.!!!

You probably have coloured hair, go by some made up pronoun and still live with your parents.

shyspudshyspudabout 2 years ago

so so good and very much worth the wait Annabelle

dynamitezdynamitezabout 2 years ago

i do want to see mike and beth together, however, i do not think there has been enough build up between the two. it does seem a bit forced. nevertheless, thank you for yet another great chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I am getting really irritated with the Mike/Beth tease. It's gotten to the point that whenever you have them in a moment to take the next step it's guaranteed for you to have something interrupt them. I

It's getting to be predictable, lazy, and no longer a charming device. You can only taunt the reader so long before they resent you for it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So Mike's going to get it on with... Santa... ? ;)

t6greent6greenalmost 2 years ago

This one was so much fun 😅

john68utjohn68utalmost 2 years ago

Great stuff here!

Can’t wait to see Mike and Beth together finally!

Like naughtyandy said below, I think Mike and Beth would be a force to behold!

Redneck_390Redneck_390almost 2 years ago

Holy cow, this is going to be so awesome! Can't wait to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

LMAO, oh this is BRILLIANT, hats off to you milady, I'm definitely looking forward to learning what follows =)

MasterAsteroidMasterAsteroidover 1 year ago

Please make some books!!

TJSkywindTJSkywindover 1 year ago

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Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

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