All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 086'

So Santa was born from the merging of a mortal and an Old God? Like an actual Lovecraftian, tentacled, madness-inducing, Old God? Explains the mind-fucking physics and time dilations then. Great story. I especially like the implication of Jack being one of those duality gods like Czernobog/Belobog. Great story.

I love this story. Keep it up Annabelle

I love your stories, but one of my favorite things about you as a writer on literotica is that you do give us an idea of when the next chapter will drop. Even when you are a little off schedule it still gives us that light at the end of the tunnel.

Lily trying to swear is the best thing.

Meow !

Been following since the beginning. Best series on the site. Consistently fresh and original

Fun fun fun. I like the "twist" on how Mrs. Claus presents. Thanks, and keep it up.

Love the yin/yang thing you have going on here.

I'm also starting to suspect why the Krampus is here now and why Santa has allowed it. It will be interesting to see if I'm right. I have always thought you a great writer, but the intricacy of the story you've woven is truly a marvelous thing to behold. Don't let the rare bad comments get you down. Most likely they are from jealous people that can't stand others that can do what they can't. Thanks for Sharing.

Marvelous, unsurprisingly 😊

Another great story. Thanks

I was wondering why Mike has tried using anymore spiders, if the ghost of Christmas present is any indication it will at least work on the ghosts. The Santa/eldritch combo when I think of some the other stories associated with Christmas makes sense. I think Jenny would be the perfect backup for Mike in this situation plus let's I really want to see her do a march of the toy soldiers bit on krampus. But how to break her out of the spell is going to be tricky.

Thank you for another great chapter.

Sincerely returning reader.

always love forward to the new story coming out!!!... i will be sat counting the days..E>

This story is so wild. Really interested how this continues.

I'm liking the balance of silly fun and serious stuff better this book. Thanks for that :-)

I'm a bit confused about who's Santa still... is the one who's been delivering presents recently NOT truly Santa, but some kind of stand-in? Or are Krampus and him both equally Santa?

That bit with the woman Jack saw in the mirror has me totally confused, though. Is she some other side to Jack? Or somehow related to Santa? The memories seem summer-y, rather than christmas-y, so it almost seems like she doesn't even belong in this book... who IS she?

As always - absolutely amazing stuff :)

Thoroughly loving every moment of this.

Many thanks for sharing with us.

Good morning Annabelle,

Thank you for this amazing tale though, i will admit, i am always disapointed when i finish each episode as it means that i now need to wait for the next lol.

Anyhow, you are by far my favourite writer

Regards

Another great read.

I've enjoyed the entire series, and so glad I happened to read that first one.

Love love love it 😻

You did it again, another great chapter in this yule version of HFHM.

I do wonder where you get that amount of kittens that can take away the earth shattering pain of stepping on a Lego, is your house some sort of focal point for kittens?.

Still going strong....I really love it.

Well written, edited, balanced (the sex vs non-sex, between fantasy en myth, etc) and composed.

I had so much fun reading this story! I couldn’t put it down. Thank you.

Great as always

Really great, I love this series and keep coming back to it time after time. Cheers

Whoops! Sexy Mrs Clause is gonna get a little Mike!!!

Great chapter, enjoy reading this story

I came across this series about a week or two ago.

The first chapter sucked me in and now I'm waiting for new chapters.

Keep up the good work Annabelle.

I'm curious if we'll ever find out more about Kisa's past. *fingers crossed*

I couldn't say why off hand but I really liked this chapter. Thanks for sharing!

The most disappointing thing is that I found this awesome story before it was finished I have binged through it all cracked up laughing teared up and painted a succubus tale on my wife keep up the great work and I will be there in June

Usually I don't comment, but I needed you to know that I appreciate you, Anabelle. Stumbled upon your writing in Ch. 31 and have been with you since (don't worry I started from the beginning).

Amazing chapter like always

Cant wait to read more

Ill be honest i don't fully grasp the Santa origin story you have stated but if my gut is telling ke is true then the REAL Santa turned into Krampus while the Spirit of Santa (the jolly loving side) was crafted from the people image of him and locked away his body(?) that became Krampus

Also the summer version of Jack talking with "what did you do to us" makes me feel of possible Dissociative Identity Disorder

Well anyway glad to hear you have your own hope in the form of us readers

As always stay safe and take care

---- a short time reader

Best episode in a while 💀

I absolutely loved. "AND I AM ALL OUT OF COAL!"...

Thanks again for starting us all on this journey.

I'm a little upset that it's May and I'm still immersed in a Christmas story... Keep em coming we're hungry for more!

Wish this chapter had some sexy time in it....

What a waste of time, so many chapters no Beth in them... After reading 80 chapters still no hope, probably will never read it anyway...

Again just well done.

I love the story

Reading through it again while waiting for these chapters.

Your talent as an author is up there with the greats.

You captivate, create emotions and draw in the reader.

In my humble opinion your a writer.

No doubt about it.

Be well

Keep up the good work!

I have a feeling that Christmas Present and Prancer may have rescued the 'spare bag'. Also what if Jack/Jackie is the First Elf but when Krampus came into existence she got bumped around and essentially forgotten. Also as an Aussie was interested to see that Death and Lily didn't find the Six White Boomers (Large Male Kangaroos) that help Santa do the Australian leg of the run.

When it comes to Beth, I hope she not only gets her time with Mike but we also get to read more adventures of her sapphic side as she explores more of her bisexuality and perhaps even bringing her briefcase into play.

Sexy time is good. But I love the story that accompanies it more.

Keep up the awesome work.

As always, the story doesn't disappoint. Keep up the fantabulous job. ❤️

Loved the Twist with Krampus and Santa. And Yuki new demeanor is fun. And Mike acknowledging that he’s been reckless with who and what he cums feels like a long time coming. Honestly, I would except to Judy not care at some point and see how many cross species breeds he can produce.

Seven stars are not enough for this edition of HFHW. You really out did yourself this time. Cant wait for the next chapter

I was waiting for something like this the moment I realized this book would be about Christmas. But a fighting 20-feet snowman who gets obliterated by Dancer? That is epic! And death naive persona mixed in really made that chapter.

I'm not sure what is going on with Jack at the moment, but hope it will become a bit clearer the next couple of chapters. Currently I only get she is torn but leaing towards sticking with the Krampus.

The reunion between Mike, Kisa and Tink was very nice. And I'm a fan of the new angle of Yuki, I hope we get to see more of her. (And Callisto, tbh).

Thanks so much for sharing, the least I can do is vote 5 golden ones.

This is just a good time wrapped in a frolic wrapped in a romp. Bless you

Okay, just rambling off ideas here, but since Mike's magic is based on sex and love, i don't see an easy way to help Santa. Maybe if he could fuck the Krampus, but I don't see that happening...

Sympathetic magic is an option, of course, but with so few pieces of Santa about (I think it's just as unlikely that the corrupted elves, or reindeers, would concent to an orgy, as him fucking the Krampus), he only really has Mrs Claus and Holly available.

And while Holly sex is almost certainly unavailable, I think it might change the public image of Mrs Claus if she joined in.

I just don't know if I think the connection is strong enough if he just have Holly...?

In any case, another ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Okay, it is 3 in the morning you are so velvety cruel to leave it like this. Thank you for your unbelievable writing skills. Tomorrow evening will not come soon enough 🙃

Lit.

I'm not much for commenting but I just wanted to say I've been here from the very first chapter and thoroughly enjoy reading your work so thank you for sharing this with all of us. Keep up the good work and hop you get all you wish out of life.

Hand out coal and kick ass gotta love it thank you so...

When I discovered this story recently I was able to binge read it into the start of the North Pole shenanigans, and I breathlessly thought wow that was fun! Then promptly forgot about it while awaiting the next installment. Picked it up again and had to restart at chapter 80 to sort it back out. Even better than I remember! The development of the plot, with its turns, stutters, and accelerations, the detailed character motivations and emotions (well, except Death, he stays pretty on keel), and of course, the outstanding sexy interactions all reward the reader in spades.

I was so inspired I tried to write a sexy vignette myself. It was so clunky it not only sounded like it was it was written by a hack, but also by someone who had never had sex in their life. A couple of lines were funny though, so maybe I’ll revisit it.

Thanks so much for your stories, they define the 5-star rating!

More magic from the master writer.

Looks like the author saw the movie Stand Up Guys.

"AND I'M ALL OUT OF CAOL!" lmao Rowdy Roddy Piper would be pleased, I'm certain.

A few unexpected surprises here, another brilliant installment, thanks for continuing to write this =)

More than a few laughs during this fun filled outing. I love Lily, and it makes me laugh every time she tries to swear or express herself normally, and how you make Death's child like attitude weave into the story and interacting with Lily's hardened outlook is inspiring. Well done in making my current downturns in fortune a little lighter. Thank you.

On the subject of writing, I totally concur. So much light-hearted love has indeed inspired, even me to start writing again. I am practicing my writing skills (on huhum, another site) and doing soooo much research. It's making my nose bleed! Reading your work is an refreshing hiatus in the minefield of Celtic Mythology.... Enough said?

Another blistering instalment.

I just want to say, Death is my favorite!!!

She would be darned if she let Frosty and his inbred family stop her here." hahahaha

love you story and writing style

I totally agree, in regards to your advice at the end of this chapter.

Stories are simple; Boy meets girl; boy dies; girl moves on. This is a story. in the editing phase you add the details that so many people fret over.

I, too, write. I have done NaNoWriMo for 13 years straight now, and have won each time, with more novels than that. This is good advice.

Just write it.

The Lord of the Rings took 14 years for Tolkien to write. And he was a language professor.

It takes a lot of time, but the first draft is the most fun. When you're done with that, you're so in love with your story you can't help but finish it.

Now back to Annabelle; Excellent story. I've read from the beginning and have no criticisms. Excellent!

This is the third time I've read this story. This is the furthest I've made it. When I get too close to the end, I have to take break. Need at least 5 chapters at a time! Amazing story. Your writing skills are soaring! The emotional roller coaster is such a fun ride. THANK YOU

Ethereal reinders and the first elf made of pure energy recall me of the WoW's Sha'tar.

Youbgive a new meanig to white night with Mike's milky shower.

So much fun at an breahless pace.

Lilly Helper language is hilarious.,.OH FUDGE!

Ok, so totally whack. And whacky!!

"My favorite numbers have fours in them."

A friend of mine got a new phone number, and his Chinese-American mom told him he had to change it, because it had 4s in it, signifying death.

The part that made me laugh the most for some reason:

"I AM HERE TO HAND OUT COAL AND BEAT SOME ASS!" He howled, his own shadow dancing wildly behind him. Off to the side, a mostly headless troll twitched, its limbs twitching like a dying bug. "AND I AM ALL OUT OF COAL!" -- Z.N.

I am doing something nice for myself by reading your enthralling stories Annabelle! They take me away and allow me to push away my continuous pain that wrecks havoc on my body. I find much comfort in the tales you weave. Reading Lily cuss right now in the manner that she has no choice in doing is so delightful.

"you'll never learn to swim if you refuse to get wet". Dayumn you're a wise Sage.

I absolutely adore your work, I've been enjoying your writing for well over a year and I feel so full after reading - in the best ways. This journey is so much more than a piece of erotica or fiction, but also a tome of meaning, truth, and wisdom.

Thank you Annabelle, you're a gift to us all!

Love the story keep up the great work

The whimsy and silly in this book are so delightful! The writing is terrific. I thank you for entertaining us all "and to all a good night".