by writerannabelle
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Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
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How this story is progressing, when I think I have a bit figured out. You pull a switch and I get a chuckle or a gasp, it's really difficult to wait for the next chapter..
I don’t know how you do it! You’ve kept the wit and fun of this series going, and I eagerly check to see if the next chapter has been released. Thank you for all the effort you’ve put into this!
aaahhh, I should've waited another few weeks and read 88 and 89 together, these four pages went by way too fast!
This is, hands-down, the best series on this site, and I for one can't wait until I can buy the entire story as a giant, hand-cover book.
Excellent chapter.
I'm feeling like we're going to need a "Yippee-kai-yay MF'er" as the Krampus falls from Nakasone tower at the end of this. Or is the Die Hard reference too much?
This is fun reading, it is feeding a need for exploring magical mysteries
SR
I simply can not get enough of your story. One of my birthday present requests is your physical books.
I hate to sound like a party poopper I know everybody likes the sex parts eh,there alright I guess but to me I love your plots you make a person want to be in the story for me the sex parts take away from the story sence each installment is not that long and once a month your the wattpads greatest author to me that is,you make my day brighter on my darkest days. waiting for the next chapter
Hello. I've been reading this story since chapter 3 and I have to say it is just getting better and better as you go.
Please don’t stress about how fast you are posting. These stories are a gift and I thank you for them
Your characters are always incredible, but Yuki has been my favorite by far. I was so happy, almost to tears, reading about her healed heart. And my stomach dropped like a rock when I thought she was going to be in lethal danger. Amazing, outstanding work as always
Not worth the time in waiting or reading it. Refuse to give a star rating.
Episode is exciting but this is just a run on with new character development with out addressing past characters such asthe lily and death. Or the house thats untended.
Its more like another commercial break that ends with more cliffhangers and new character development that never ends.
There is not enough pages here or content for existing characters to merit any direction towards a comclusion.
I appreciate your eagerness to please us, your readers. I look forward to reading each episode because they are well written and interesting, exciting and thought provoking. But please pace yourself. I am a selfish person. I want to be reading your works for many years to come. I can't do that if you burn yourself out trying to please us. Thank you for what you have written, as well as for what you have yet to write. I am happy to wait as long as I have to in order to keep reading your stories.
Looks like I’m the first to comment on your latest chapter! Lol Hi there Annabelle! I have only started reading your story in the last month or so and have quickly fallen in love with it and your writing! I have enjoyed every major decision made so far and have greatly enjoyed watching the development of all the characters so far. I look forward to continued chapters.. as I have now joined everyone else in waiting with baited breath. Thanks again and know that you have a new and dedicated fan!
PS. I’m hoping that Mike and Beth end up finally fucking in the epilogue of book 5 (I have been waiting since shortly after they met!) but I am content to wait as I enjoy the story!
Fantastic stuff !!!! Amazed at how this just keeps getting better... Loving it.!!
Many thanks for sharing all your hard work.
Deserves way more than 5 stars !!!
I adore this series, legitimately i started reading it a few months ago and have read it, as well as the side stories at least twice fully, along with actually purchasing all of the books that are currently available,you are an amazing writer, and I always look forward to the next chapter.
Five Stars !!! Not a warm cup of coffee, but hot chocolate with whipped cream. :)
Huh, the fireworks are going off early?
Any, thanks and can't wait for the next one!
Very nice story but soo short as to not be worth reading until the whole Santa set is complete. It's like buying a glass of wine but only getting a mouthfull
Well done and thanks for sharing! I hope Mike is OK and doesn't wind up with some nasty side effect from having sucked up all that godly power. You know, absolute power corrupts and all that kind of stuff.
Thank you for this story! You are very creative and I always look forward to your next chapter.
To tell you that this is an amazing book in the novel, would be redundant. To tell you that you have captured my every thought as to what comes next would be also redundant!
Seeing that Jack will now come to the side of Mike and the gang is great and the process of how you put it being the elf battery to charge mike and to help Yuki was absolutely amazing!!!
I feel like I am running out of Waze to tell you how wonderful your story writing is, so all I can do is thank you again for sharing this wondrous tale With us.
Sincerely,
Daniel
Um. The north pole has ocean beneath it, then sea floor. Unlike the south where there is a continent under the ice. I'm going to hope for "magical concept earth", as I've just reached the point where Yuki is pulling on earth magic for the "bedrock under the ice".
I've been loving Yuki's involvement in the past few stories. She seems so vulnerable and also so powerful at the same time. I love her and would enjoy more focus on her.
Santa/Krampus. Philosophically, it sounds just like you. That last sentence? Bingo. —
How are we to understand the satan? I don’t know that we fully can, but I understand the satan to be a cosmic spiritual-psychic phenomenon arising from idolatry and accusation, reaching its ultimate form in anti-human empire. Thus, for Isaiah, Lucifer is the King of Babylon who falls with the fall of Babylon. The satan is more than a metaphor, but less than a person; by that I mean the satan, though a very real and dangerous phenomenon, does not actually possess ontological being. The satan, like evil itself, is parasitic in nature. It cannot exist independently because it is not created by God. The satan can only exist by colonizing a host. If there is no host for the satan, the satan ceases to exist at all. Indeed, the devil is presented in Revelation as having “great wrath, because he knows that his time is short.” Though the satanic is properly a phenomenon and not a person, the satanic phenomenon is so real, so powerful, so deadly, so destructive, that we cannot help but personify the satanic as Satan. This is probably a necessary and helpful move. And if we associate the satanic with a fallen angel, surely it arises from an instinctual understanding that the very worst is nothing but the diabolical corruption of the very best.
~~ Brian Zahnd
The block and letter is such an amazing touch, like wow.
The soul repair scene silly, sexy, and fun.
The start of the chapter felt a little slow, but built in the way a good chapter.
Seems like Jack could use a little soul repair and also be the focus to pull Naia out to help. Really hoping the house welcomes Holly and Jack to live there in the end of this arc.
I Always look forward to your updates. Amazing story, great scenes and an amazing job of really giving every character a true sense of individualism. Can honestly say that this is my favorite story that I've ever read. Keep up the good work, and stay safe.
Being an odd fellow, I don't usually comment until the (tails) end, having waited until all the Harry Potter books were out, then reading the series start to finish. Due to WA's lengthy epic, impossible to do, as hopefully it never ends. Always entertaining, sometimes surprising, as she weaves forgotten characters into current times yet gives them a life that is almost real. Not just sex, but love, rare in these pages. Keep on keeping on.
It's fun, emotional, sexy, funny, smart, and can totally hit you right in the feels. With every chapter this story gets better! You'll laugh! You'll cry! You'll cum buckets!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
This story never failes to amaze me. First the twist with Jack being a woman, then a woman who has a god inside of her, now it's Freya from norse mythology and Yuki manages to even the oods with Gryla finally showing up. And then Mike uses sex to get Naia to help with soul surgery?
I don't know how, but this tale keeps getting better with each installment, and I think this way since late book 3. How is that even possible?
Annabelle, you are truly a genius at storytelling. Take those 5 stars and continue amazing people for free. Thank you so much!
Holy shirt! Now that I’ve been caught up for a while I wish you could write faster, but your attention to detail is so good that it’s worth the wait. I hope you are making a good living from the work you are putting in on this!
I’m actually in Iceland and the use of our stories and mythology is awesome to see. What a great story!
Absolutely the best chapter of this portion of the book thus far. I was worried that you seemed to be getting bogged down in this north pole /Christmas portion. But things really picked up speed. Thank you and keep writing!
I love this series so much. I am in awe of the creativity and glee that you wield like two rubber mallets
I guess I’m just going to have to find a way to jump ahead in time to when this series is over and read the whole thing all at once.
Of course then I will be sad that the series is over.
Ugh never mind. I’ll wait.
This whole story has been so great can't wait for the next chapter keep it up please Jay
Another awesome chapter! I'm enjoying Holly's character even more; she's a little freak, haha!
Schroediger should feel happy as a cat, Keep up the joy and you are always so punnie
I started at ch. 1 thinking it would be an easy read and forget, wow! You are talented, and I'm not ready for it to end. When I try to explain the non sex parts to my wife and adult children; yea I'm old (Death and Lilly delivering presents cracks me up) they don't really get it, but it's okay because I get it.
I wrote a lot when I was younger but never had the courage to pursue it. Thank you for being braver than me
Oh Captain, my Captain!
Great story lines! Exciting erotic sex, intertwined with romance and old fashioned feel good! You make outlandish scenarios and the bizarre cast of characters within, not only believable, but so realistic and personable that I feel I know them. They’re my hero’s, my friends. I fear for them and cheer them on. I want to eat breakfast with them, do all the magical and silly things they do. And of course, I want to make love and/or fuck all of the lovely unique and extremely sexy females. Wouldn’t no where to start but wouldn’t ever want it to end! I love this story.
This story is the one to rule all stories.
Your amazing imagination is stunning.
Wish you many novels and many many readers
I had by doubts about a while novel decided to a Christmas story in this series. But this is fun and wildly imaginative. Thanks
I was so worried you where going to pull another Velvet. Referencing the devine fox of the heavenly realm Kurama was very nice. If she doesn't wake up with another tail if not a total of 5 I will be disappointed.
Very fun chapter. The Old God reveal was great. I was thinking Demeter of Frost and Harvest.
Read about Santa as a quantum phenomenon years ago, in New Scientist. As a quantum phenomenon he can be in multiple places at the same time UNLESS seen, when the wave function collapses, he's obliged to be in the place where he's seen, so can't be anywhere else - so NO PEEKING!
Enjoying this more second time around.
5* every chapter, thanks for sharing.
Dixon (UK)
Okay! WOW! Not what I expected but definitely fantastic! So many questions but too few answers! But I'm sure you'll provide the answers when necessary. I'm still enjoying this strange tale though I wonder what Death and Lilly are up to? Guess I'll have to keep reading! I still think this story would make a good mini series! Please don't stop writing and Annabelle, in case you're wondering in my opinion you are absolutely the best! I wish you well and simply biting my nails trying to figure out how Mike will tame the Krampus and put the North Pole back to normal! Thanks!
"I'm the man who's going to save Christmas." With quantum shit and a mathematical problem on how to fit different sized volumes thought a common surface and another one on how to bride different nature magics.
Your imagination is immensurable entertaining.
I've always been a fan of Tink, but Holly is definitely growing on me. Think of the magic a threesome with Mike and the two of them could manifest. They could save Christmas, and New years day too!
Odins Wife is a pretty heavy hitter, but if St. Nick merged with the Norse Yuletide chances are good that he merged with either the King of the Aesir or .. thinking about it seems more plausible .. the jolly red giant with the short hilted hammer
😏 referring to the quantum cat with Kisa present.,..
He who is not named 😉
And so many references big and small....
So it's kinda like doing brain surgery while fucking an elf, but soul surgery instead. No problem 😄. Gotta keep Holly handy.in case he needs to do more. And love her finishing him up by hand, though another big sticky mess. Who's got to clean that up. Need to wake those other elves up,but it would probably cause more of that fucking malady. Bad malady!!
Can’t wait for the hot androgynous fem!Jack to get Mike’s semi-divine D.
Try to explain that sentence with no context lol
Wow, just wow. Holly, won't be the same after Mike leaves. I think that she'll want to relocate to the house. I can't see her wanting to stay away from for weeks. More likely want to see him every few days, lol
Glad to get back to catching up through this sexy saga. 13 days until Christmas 2023! --Z.N.
So does this mean we get more Yuki in future books? Because yes please, such a cool, interesting character :)