All Comments on 'Home for the Holiday Ch. 04'

I assume there will be a threesome next.....very nice, sweet and sexy....

from sticky hand

you are..

Awesome development overall through the whole story. I honestly don't think you can make it go any further between Rachel and David before it becomes an all-night sex session. Except for maybe if they build it up while sober. The inhibitions released udner the influence sort of drove the whole plot ot begin with, but you mentioned the other half of that--sobering regret after the fact. It sounds like something that would be the ultimate realization if the consumation occurred with no outside influences.

I need a brother so I can be his fuck toy. That would be my Fantasy come true. or should I say my wet horny pussy. please write more ASAP. You are the best

Fantastic as always!

Another solid chapter, if you catch my drift.

What do I think should happen? Delay things even more!

Thanks - I love you stories. I too, am glad your writng and posting again!!

I can't tell an artist how to create his masterpiece, but I can sure enjoy the process. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see what happens next!

good god this whole story is so fucking hot. damn i came just reading it. mmmm, i wish i had a brother to go that with.

I've read all your works here on Literotica. You have the Gift of telling a tale that leaves the reader thinking, "yes, that's the way I feel...."

Kudo's to you.

...no three-ways or other compications. This story stands alone very well. I am deeply into brother-sister incest, and hate it when an author "ruins" it by adding other participants or by breaking up the couple. Sweet, passionate love should out!

a little disjointed and hard to follow very confusing needs a good editor and a rewrite

As wild as you want it to be. Ribbons and ribbons worth.

amazing, too erotic for words.

Where is the rest of this story?

Ahhhhh!!! All the perils of young (maybe they're) adolescent lovers. The explorations, the undulating crevices, the excitement, the excavations and the ever, lingering anticipation of the sating and satisfying of the young couples bodies and minds!!!

Several of the previous comments have--as there are always some itching to ruin a great story--made their "Anonymous" suggestions of the usual deviancy and perversion to extend the story beyond its current love affair of a brother and sister!! Idioticy!!! They offer suggestions of ruin such as threesomes, or addding a non-blood relative (to an incest story of all idiotic things), throwing in shit-fucking, and even of letting their parents catch them in some compromising positions so the parents can be enticed to participate, all for their perverted visions of destroying an excellent sibling incest love affair!!!

On the plus side, there is a generous amount of suggestions, of which I totally agree, to keep any additional extensions of this sibling incestual love story of pure carnal, and now fully consummated, keeping their sexual affair honorable and true to the incestual basics--keep the story between, and of, David and Rachel, ONLY!! This story of "Home For The Holiday", thus far, is so true to incestual love and respect, endearment and truth, of any blood-familial incest, that I have read in a long time!!! Though fictional, the story has such reality it is very easy to imagine the true nature of all this couples actions!! Stories as pure and true to incest as this story has been so far is extremely hard to find. So, the advise of us incest "purists" is keep the story clear of slut, smut, gutter, perverted, pornographic and deviant sex!!!!

That was extremely hot. Awesome.

PLEASE finish the story!!!! I REALLY want to know what happens next!!!

A FOREVER FAN!!!!

Sibling seduction is the best seduction.

This ending was much hotter and more erotic than the alternate ending, and built on the long, slow tease that had been developing from the beginning. The pacing was perfection.

I think “In Sara’s Pants” is some of your best erotic writing, and I come back to reread that story quite often, especially when I need a refresher from some of what passes for erotic literature on Literotica.

However, I think I’ll also be adding this story to my “revisit” list.

The slow, steady, continual buildup is like the sensual, unhurried fulfillment of an exquisitely torturous sexual yearning, finally realized; the kind of writing that could almost make you come without touching yourself. The cat-and-mouse game of David and Rachel slowly raising the stakes and increasing the titillation is so deliciously arousing. Please give us more of these two. Five Stars.