All Comments on 'Home for the Holidays Ch. 03'

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stewartb almost 3 years ago

I like the story...BUT 2 itty-bitty pages...by the time I get the next little section I may not remember the thread of whats been going on. Even if a story has to be sectioned off...at least give the poor reader who has waited patiently something to knaw on.

nthusiastic almost 3 years ago

Ugh!

It better not be Steven who catches her.

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please

Please update soon! Please don’t let her get badly hurt and she needs a happy ending! I hate Steven and her sister.

wawfer almost 3 years ago

Damn! My heart is racing! I think her sister pushed the latter! Or something close. Omg I need the next chapter lol

Anonymousalmost 2 years ago

Surprised that the stupid Kenna can't properly defend herself against the likes of Steven!! Surely the give training to 911 operators too

dirtyoldbiman 12 months ago

great dialogue. I can almost "see" all the characters

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