All Comments on 'Home From College'

This was a terrific story. What teen-aged boy wouldn't love for is sister to return from law school as a horny woman who wants him?

VERY hot story! I'm really enjoying it.

Please tell me you're planning on continuing it?

Thanks

I absolutely loved this story! I don't usually read many in this section, but WOW!!

I noticed myself reading faster and faster to see what happened next...lol.

Keep up the good work!

Great beginning to "Home From College", please continue the

adventure with a few more chapters!

Please continue this story its great

You are the single best erotic writer on this website. This story blew me away

Now we just need the rv trip!!!!!!

o cmon, u cant be serious, a 10inch long cock? and she took it all in? and they fucked for 6 hours, dude u must be outta ur mind, even pornstars cant do that, mustve taken a whole bottle of viagra....

nice story why did you stop would like to hear more on these two

i couldn't even get into this story what guy would act like that he would be so pissed that she was coming home that he would find a way to move in with a friend or live at the beach and keep the monster dicks in your gay head

The story was great until you added the sister fucking 30 guys one night. Here you had a very erotic story and ruined it with the gang bang. Initially gave you a 4, but after reflection would have dropped it to a 2.

Some people seem to find it difficult to separate fiction from real life. But I like all,your stories.

Will you ever write the next chapter covering the RV trip ? I do hope so !

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"I knew you'd be coming in here," Kate said, a smile on her face when she saw his cock begin to harden. "Maybe you'd like to finish that massage now," she suggested, one hand trailing down between her legs to rub up and down between her spread pussy lips, then bringing her finger up to her mouth and gently sucking on it. "Suck my pussy for me, John, suck it," she implored her brother. "Suck my pussy until I cum."

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.....ummm, bad timing sis, I really need to take a shit, like right now! (Hehe)

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why don't you start your breakfast with the breakfast of champions," Kate suggested, pushing her chair away from the table and turning it so that she was facing him. "Doesn't it look tasty?"

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Damn you're a horny butch, sis! I don't do anything till Ive had three cups of coffee, so put a cork in it or sit on my lap or something, just be quiet and let me wake up.

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John quickly dropped his baggies to the floor,

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Baggies? Heh.. Well I guess you cant really call them shorts... Hell its hard to even find shorts anymore, all they seem to sell nowadays are those gay ass knee length things, so tacky, lol!

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Because he had just cum, John couldn't get to that point and his cock was impossibly hard as Kate continued to ride him. Kate fucked him steadily for more than 30 minutes before she stopped, out of breath, her face flushed.

"Oh, John, I can't believe you're still hard," she said. "This is beyond my wildest dreams,"

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Hell, I do better than that before I cum the first time, lol. ...and if Im on my back I can pretty much go forever, just cant seem to get off lying on my back:/ (guess there are perks to being in the minority here, hehe;)

I did think it was kinda funny how she took his big ass cock up in her without batting an eye or taking her time! Makes you wonder what the hell shes been shoving up there!!

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John was in shock as Kate began to worm her ass onto his cock.

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Rofl, like shes going to really take that up the ass without real lube?! Gotta love fiction!!

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God, you can fuck me all day and all night with that thing," Kate said, shaking her head. "But let's go to the bedroom. It will be more comfortable,"

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...sooo, does this mean no surfing this morning?? ;)

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John dislodged himself from his sister's pussy and went to his own room through the adjoining bathroom, they had been fucking non-stop for six hours.

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Hard for six hours?! Buhahaha! Can you fucking imagine if that was real, how fucking painful it would be? His dick would feel like a truck ran over it!!

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Kate's pussy was raw, like it had never been, not even when she had taken on 30 guys one night for the hell of it at a fraternity party.

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Holy shit! Sis is a huge slut!! Looks like brother should have had her tested before he licked it or fucked it! Now he'll prolly have a swollen dick for all the wrong reasons, rofl!

Well all in all it was pretty damned entertaining! That certainly rang a lot more true on some levels than most stories on here! Thats more like what you would expect from a brother when his hot sister wants him! Thanks for writing!

wow

Damn! Who are all these lucky bastards with tongues that can lick their eyebrows?? Lol.

well not much of a description of all that sex that went on:/. Six hours? Someone shoot his dick up with concrete?? Hehehe!

Well anyway, a really good start and looks like could get better with more chapters! Keep writing!

This story was great. Now let’s hear about their RV trip up the coast. I have a feeling John will be able to fuck her and of her friends they meet on the trip.

Not only is it not easy to find a guy with a 10 inch cock and a girl who can swallow a 10 inch cock but to have a family sit down for a meal without a cell phone and the whole family help clean up.....simply fucking amazing!!!!

ok I see now, it was 2003 ;>)

excellent little stroke tale,,not much story, but that's what a stroker is all about

maybe another chapter but add mom this time

Beautiful,smart girl and then you make her a Sleazy Slut.

Why?

Disappointing

This ruined the story.

I'll say that was very hot but I agree up until she mentioned banging 30 guys in one night.

Why ruin a beautiful story until you have his sexy sister and have a gang bang.

It may just be my opinion but this story was pretty decent up until Kate showed her true colors that John was nothing but a fucktoy to Kate by ordering him to get on the floor and fuck her pussy and ass like the whore she is,and then to further degrade her by saying she took 30 loads in all her holes at a frat house proves what a rotten skanky ho she is.Oh and even tho no mention but I wouldn't be surprised if the bitch fucked other officials to pass her bar exam to be a slimy cunted lawyer.

As they say "No Accounting For Taste"

absolutely trashed what had been - up to that point - a 5-star tale, turning it into one that was barely worth one star!

Why in the hell do most you writers make the female characters total sluts???? It was going ok until the gang bang. One star. Next time try for erotica, not sleaze.

Really was the College Whore the John should get fucking tested,I mean jeezus Kate is the epitome of White Trash,to come home and potentially expose her brother to possible STD's,and not only that but early on she showed her complete lack of love or compassion for anyone especially John.

I cringe at the thought of Kate becoming a Moralless Bloodsucking Lawyer that she wants to be,hopefully she never passes the Bar Exam otherwise her very soul will be lost.Sorry but this story is devoid of any redeeming qualities,it sucked.

Why do a lot of writers give guys unreasonably large junk and have girl take it down

A stripper friend once tole me she could take a huge cock but nobody better bother her for a few days. Now a guy with a normal sized cock, she would be all over the guy. No she was a friend, and that's all either of us wanted. Companionship means a lot more than just sex. Trust me I am 71 and been alone for more than 20 years. If I had a choice of pussy one time or a weekly hug, hugs win.

30 guys in one night at a frat party? There is nothing sexy abiut that. A whore is a whore. Atleast hooker and porn stars get paid for being a whore sister just gives it away. Fucking disgusting whore. I actually threw up in my mouth thinking how disgusting of a whore the sister is.

The absurdly large cock doesnt really add the story if you ask me .... big cocks are fun and all but 10” long and5” wide is rediculous.

Well, I liked the story. Erotic. Size does matter, as does stamina.

Whoa, what a hot story. Wish Kate was MY sister. Damn 6 hours fucking. Only done that a few times. Got to give this story nothing but 10 stars…

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30 guys at a frat party? Definitely just a pump and dump. Not wifey material.

Great but a bit short

Good story. I can tell it’s one of your earlier ones. Oversize cock, slut sister (30 guys, really!?!?!,) and next to no character development. That said, I enjoyed the story for what it was… a quick stroke story.