All Comments on 'Home, Unexpectedly Early'

by CharleneBarr

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prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
Nothing special...Just a good story

love to play with her big luscious tits. See what else you can find in the attic

SmutaholicSmutaholicalmost 7 years ago
More buildup would make for a stronger story

Loved the way this one started out, and it had so much promise. But then page two came along, and it became more of a wham-bam kind of story. I much prefer a slow burn, and you certainly have the writing chops to make that happen. Hope you'll gift us with another story soon, one that takes a little longer to build to the climax.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
h, u e

"That certainly distracted my attention." I found this line a poorly worded.

there are more but this is a fine example

CharleneBarrCharleneBarralmost 7 years agoAuthor
Dear Anon

Hi, Anon - '"I found this line a poorly worded." ???

doug_noughtdoug_noughtalmost 7 years ago
Thanks Charlene

Thanks for this. A sweet and loving mum-son tale. Another winner.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518almost 7 years ago
loved it!

OMG...this was so great. I love the way you took your time, letting the romancing and teasing build slowly to a boiling point of the ultimate creshendo! I teased myself along with your words and enjoyed a lovely cum because of them. Thank you!

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 7 years ago
Beautiful story of love

Masterfully crafted. All families should experience such beautiful uninhibited love.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
good story

I got a nice Hardon from reading

tavernkeepertavernkeeperabout 6 years ago
Thanks

Just wanted to say thank you for sharing your stories. I just finished reading all of them (some for the 2nd or 3rd time) and had quite an enjoyable time. I hope that there will be more to enjoy soon.

Thank You,

rightbankrightbankabout 6 years ago
It is was fun reading

about them having fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This genre is you absolute forte!

I have become a fan and have only a few of your stories left! I will read ALL of them., Thanks for creating these memories. 5-stars once again! You do it effortless!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

good yet again. Don't stop writing

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